Rubble Tells the Tale

g a l e - f o r c e w i n d s l a s h i n g r i p p i n g rooftops walls, c o l l a p s e ~ r u b b l e tells the tale
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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mysore Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 6:56 PM
lovely write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
Jama Avatar
July 5, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Thank you kindly.
Fowler Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 7:17 AM
Nice Billie. Congratulations! :)
Layne Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 5:05 AM
This was one of my favourites. Great image. It paired so well with the language.
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 7:47 PM
Well done and congrats
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 10:51 AM
Great shape…the feel of the rain lashing. Congrats!
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 9:01 AM
Rubble tells the tale makes me think of something, specific environments we witness in some parts of the world. And the environmental touch of this truly is powerful sis! Did you also experience storms last night? I heard there was a storm where you staying! Pleasure reading this creative gem! Best wishes! A fave it is! Sending you light always
Jama Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 10:59 AM
I just drew some inspiration from natural disasters. The weather has been lovely here. Thank you for the support
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 5:39 AM
Hi Billie. I wish I could get into these hiku, hiccups I call them because they're a titch difficult to read, but this one is perfectly clear to me, Kudos to you!
Lane Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 6:07 AM
You’ve achieved success!
Jama Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 5:47 AM
Thanks Lin. I try to make it clear yet creative
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