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Rubaiyat For the Climbing Poet

While I blew on my hands and held my tongue A startling star swung out of the sky, And though to gravity need not comply, Descended to ledge where envious clung. Of course we all would climb to the summit To leap from the acme, fly with the winds, But not all have wingspan: some just have fins. Some blaze aria, others but hum it. If toe-hold needs gained, deny temptation Its perilous urge to drag on the guide, But rather find core of stillness inside And trust to Sherpa, not own impatience.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/24/2014 9:23:00 AM
Excellent piece with a powerful message! Well done, Perry. Wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Warmest regards, Pandita.
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Perry Mcdaid
Date: 12/24/2014 10:42:00 AM
Thank you very much, Pandita. Glad you enjoyed it. Merry Christmas.
Date: 11/26/2014 8:43:00 AM
Excellent pen here Perry! It sound like having some fun with a mountain climb or some. Lol...well I know I could be wrong it can be some else written here. Welcome to the soup! Hope you really like it here. Enjoyed your poem nevertheless. 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Perry Mcdaid
Date: 11/26/2014 10:53:00 AM
Thanks Dorian
Date: 11/26/2014 3:36:00 AM
- We can fly with the winds .... in our words and thoughts - A great poem with deep thoughts Perry - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Perry Mcdaid
Date: 11/26/2014 5:58:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise. Praise indeed.
Date: 11/26/2014 2:57:00 AM
you show wisdom in this pen Perry enjoyed reading it hugs
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Perry Mcdaid
Date: 11/26/2014 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Shadow.

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