Rubaiyat For the Climbing Poet

While I blew on my hands and held my tongue
A startling star swung out of the sky,
And though to gravity need not comply,
Descended to ledge where envious clung.

Of course we all would climb to the summit
To leap from the acme, fly with the winds,
But not all have wingspan: some just have fins.
Some blaze aria, others but hum it.

If toe-hold needs gained, deny temptation
Its perilous urge to drag on the guide,
But rather find core of stillness inside
And trust to Sherpa, not own impatience.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Excellent piece with a powerful message! Well done, Perry. Wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Warmest regards, Pandita.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Thank you very much, Pandita. Glad you enjoyed it. Merry Christmas.
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 8:43 AM
Excellent pen here Perry! It sound like having some fun with a mountain climb or some. Lol...well I know I could be wrong it can be some else written here. Welcome to the soup! Hope you really like it here. Enjoyed your poem nevertheless. 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 10:53 AM
Thanks Dorian
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 3:36 AM
- We can fly with the winds .... in our words and thoughts - A great poem with deep thoughts Perry - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 5:58 AM
Thank you Anne Lise. Praise indeed.
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 2:57 AM
you show wisdom in this pen Perry enjoyed reading it hugs
Mcdaid Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 5:58 AM
Thank you, Shadow.
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