Rsvp

I write with trepidation,
Remembering the words 
Sealed waxen with passion,
The pen trembles in my palm,
Again I feel faint with desire,
My declarations are wanton,
Although I dare not reveal 
Such blatant thoughts!
My breath is deep 
Likened to your words,
Although I hold no education,
Of passion and love I have 
Much knowledge.
This verse is my open heart
Each letter a declaration 
Of love’s intentions
Sent on a wish of 
Perfumed aspirations
Sealed diligently 
With a pious vow
Your muse to
Write as you will..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 4, 2010 at 9:05 AM
enjoyed your poem, have a nice day,..p.d.
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October 3, 2010 at 9:50 AM
I enjoyed this greatly. You have a gift with words:)
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September 28, 2010 at 10:45 PM
A WELL COMPOSED POEM PAULA , WELCOME TO THIS SITE ! -Raj
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September 28, 2010 at 7:04 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Paula. Wishing you the best in your writing Mikeendeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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September 28, 2010 at 5:49 AM
Nice introspective thoughts on writing. You are on the right path, Paula
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September 28, 2010 at 5:01 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creativity today.. hope your stay on soup is fun..check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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September 28, 2010 at 4:55 AM
Enjoyed reading your work this morning..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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September 28, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Welcome to soup, what a lovely write that spill your heart and soul to the reader perfectly...Michael
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