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ROY'S RIVER RIDE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Roy rode river's rhythm, raucous ripples rising, rubbery raft, raced the rapids riding 'round rocks, rambunctious, rollicking. Reveling, rascal, river rogue rushed by reeds, rollicking rambunctiously. Roy rode.

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Date: 8/4/2025 9:23:00 PM
I like this one better for the contest, Sara. Now that's what I'm talking about ... if you're going to write an alliteration poem, make it 100% alliteration! WOW! Fun read, my love. Bill p.s. he's got that duck riding thing down! :-)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/5/2025 4:47:00 PM
I'd originally written this one for the contest but then chose the other...maybe I should reconsider...hmm...thanks, me
Date: 8/4/2025 8:32:00 AM
That’s a tongue twister triumphantly terrific.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/4/2025 4:50:00 PM
appreciate your visit and your witty remarks, Richard! this was a fun write. have a splendid evening, sara
Date: 8/4/2025 4:48:00 AM
wow impressive alliteration and form ~ well executed
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/4/2025 4:50:00 PM
thank you, Line. Your complimentary words mean a great deal to me...have a great evening. Sara

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