sara Etgen-Baker Poet Rictameter

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ROY'S RIVER RIDE

ROY'S RIVER RIDE
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Roy rode
river's rhythm,
raucous ripples rising,
rubbery raft, raced the rapids
riding 'round rocks, rambunctious, rollicking.
Reveling, rascal, river rogue
rushed by reeds, rollicking
rambunctiously.
Roy rode.

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Bill Baker August 4, 2025 at 9:23 PM I like this one better for the contest, Sara. Now that's what I'm talking about ... if you're going to write an alliteration poem, make it 100% alliteration! WOW! Fun read, my love. Bill p.s. he's got that duck riding thing down! :-) sara Etgen-Baker August 5, 2025 at 4:47 PM I'd originally written this one for the contest but then chose the other...maybe I should reconsider...hmm...thanks, me

Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2025 at 8:32 AM That’s a tongue twister triumphantly terrific. sara Etgen-Baker August 4, 2025 at 4:50 PM appreciate your visit and your witty remarks, Richard! this was a fun write. have a splendid evening, sara

Line Gauthier August 4, 2025 at 4:48 AM wow impressive alliteration and form ~ well executed sara Etgen-Baker August 4, 2025 at 4:50 PM thank you, Line. Your complimentary words mean a great deal to me...have a great evening. Sara