Kim Rodrigues Poet Couplet

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Rounding Out My Performance

Stupendously, I walk a straight line, a mile high, across the tight rope.
Following my death-defying performance, I shower, slip on the soap.

11/27/2021
YOUR FUNNIEST COUPLET EVER
Sponsor: L Milton Hankins

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Jan Allison December 14, 2021 at 4:23 PM oh so funny Kim, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues December 15, 2021 at 5:04 AM Thank you! So glad to have you back and wishing you great health and happiness! Merry Christmas!

Paulette Calasibetta December 8, 2021 at 1:37 PM Congratulations on your win....the image is quite funny, but I image the reality is it hurts. Blessings, Paulette Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2021 at 2:17 PM Thanks, Paulette!

Andrea Dietrich December 7, 2021 at 3:07 PM Great irony, Kim. Congrats on an awesome win Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2021 at 3:46 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Greg Gaul December 7, 2021 at 10:37 AM Clever and so true. Well done. Congrats Kim. Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2021 at 11:13 AM Thank you, Greg!

Janice Canerdy December 6, 2021 at 8:53 AM GOOD one, Kim! A huge CONGRATS. Janice Kim Rodrigues December 6, 2021 at 11:11 AM Thank you, Janice!

Malabika Ray Choudhury December 6, 2021 at 7:49 AM Congratulations! This is hilarious! Love it! Kim Rodrigues December 6, 2021 at 11:11 AM Thank you, Malabika!

Valsa George December 6, 2021 at 5:10 AM The humor in this is laudable. Congratulations on your deserved win ! Kim Rodrigues December 6, 2021 at 11:10 AM Thank you, Valsa!

Christuraj Alex December 6, 2021 at 4:18 AM An great write as usual; sticking to the rules of the contest; with thought-provoking reflection. Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues December 6, 2021 at 4:22 AM Thank you, my friend!

Terry Flood December 6, 2021 at 12:38 AM Irony in a nutshell. Great win, Kim. Congrats. Terry Kim Rodrigues December 6, 2021 at 4:22 AM Thank you, Terry!

Beata Agustin December 5, 2021 at 10:48 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me chuckle. God bless you. Kim Rodrigues December 6, 2021 at 4:22 AM Thank you, Beata!

William Kelii Kekaula December 5, 2021 at 10:39 PM Nicely done, Kim, laughs is assured, Aloha! Kim Rodrigues December 6, 2021 at 4:22 AM Thank you, William!

John Watt December 5, 2021 at 8:56 PM Love this Kim, so funny and down-to-earth real. Enjoyed the title and graphic too. Congrats on your podium win. Kim Rodrigues December 5, 2021 at 9:05 PM Thank you, John! :)

Sam Kauffman December 5, 2021 at 6:49 PM Oh dear Kim! Hope there were no bruises, breaks or concussions! Just when we don't expect it, triumph turns into irony! Congratulations on your win! Kim Rodrigues December 5, 2021 at 9:06 PM Thank you, Sam! :)

Susan Ashley December 5, 2021 at 6:39 PM Your clever pen never fails you, Kim. A wonderfully ironic couplet, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Kim Rodrigues December 5, 2021 at 9:06 PM Thank you, Susan! ~ hugs

L Milton Hankins December 5, 2021 at 5:07 PM Congratulations, Kim. This one elicited a hearty laugh. You might want to try writing for a comedian! (chuckling) Kim Rodrigues December 5, 2021 at 5:14 PM Thank you so much! :)

Caren Krutsinger November 30, 2021 at 9:26 PM This is terrific! Good luck in Hank's contest. Kim Rodrigues December 5, 2021 at 5:14 PM Thank you!

Valsa George November 30, 2021 at 8:38 PM This is indeed so funny ! After a death defying performance, slipping on the soap and falling is real tragedy! Kim Rodrigues December 5, 2021 at 5:14 PM Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar November 28, 2021 at 8:34 AM Dear Kim, thanks for the laugh. You walk a tight rope and slip on a piece of soap :) Hope you di not get hurt. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues November 28, 2021 at 10:35 AM It’s all up in the air ;)

Ilene Bauer November 28, 2021 at 2:52 AM Ha! Very funny and clever, Kim! Good luck in the contest… Kim Rodrigues November 28, 2021 at 6:30 AM Thank you, Ilene!

Gershon Wolf November 27, 2021 at 6:53 PM Now, That is Funny! What tremendous irony you've penned. Super contest entry, Kim. Have a blessed Sunday, Gershon Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2021 at 8:30 PM Thank you so much! Have a blessed Sunday too!

Sotto Poet November 27, 2021 at 6:19 PM Kim, you've done something sarcastic and amusing! We regularly expect things to go one way in life, only to find ourselves in a different situation. Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2021 at 8:31 PM Truly! Thanks!

Evelyn Judy Buehler November 27, 2021 at 3:38 PM Truly ironic, and quite hilarious, Kim! Best wishes for the contest. :D Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2021 at 3:51 PM Thank you, Evelyn!

David Kavanagh November 27, 2021 at 2:19 PM Such is life Kim, we may expect to go one way, then a simple twist brings us another, very enjoyable and well thought out, cheers David Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2021 at 2:19 PM Thank you, David!

David Mchattie November 27, 2021 at 11:04 AM That's one thing you learn in prison... never drop the soap. Well penned. Good luck in the contest. Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2021 at 2:19 PM I’ve heard that…lol!

Tom Cunningham November 27, 2021 at 10:29 AM Lol, this is a gem Kim, good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2021 at 10:49 AM Thank you! So glad you liked it, Tom!