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Rounding Out My Performance

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Stupendously, I walk a straight line, a mile high, across the tight rope. Following my death-defying performance, I shower, slip on the soap. 11/27/2021 YOUR FUNNIEST COUPLET EVER Sponsor: L Milton Hankins

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2021 4:23:00 PM

oh so funny Kim, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/15/2021 5:04:00 AM

Thank you! So glad to have you back and wishing you great health and happiness! Merry Christmas!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 12/8/2021 1:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win....the image is quite funny, but I image the reality is it hurts. Blessings, Paulette

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2021 2:17:00 PM

Thanks, Paulette!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2021 3:07:00 PM

Great irony, Kim. Congrats on an awesome win

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2021 3:46:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Greg Gaul

Date: 12/7/2021 10:37:00 AM

Clever and so true. Well done. Congrats Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2021 11:13:00 AM

Thank you, Greg!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/6/2021 8:53:00 AM

GOOD one, Kim! A huge CONGRATS. Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2021 11:11:00 AM

Thank you, Janice!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/6/2021 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations! This is hilarious! Love it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2021 11:11:00 AM

Thank you, Malabika!

Valsa George

Date: 12/6/2021 5:10:00 AM

The humor in this is laudable. Congratulations on your deserved win !

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2021 11:10:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/6/2021 4:18:00 AM

An great write as usual; sticking to the rules of the contest; with thought-provoking reflection. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2021 4:22:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Terry Flood

Date: 12/6/2021 12:38:00 AM

Irony in a nutshell. Great win, Kim. Congrats. Terry

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2021 4:22:00 AM

Thank you, Terry!

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/5/2021 10:48:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me chuckle. God bless you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2021 4:22:00 AM

Thank you, Beata!

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/5/2021 10:39:00 PM

Nicely done, Kim, laughs is assured, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/6/2021 4:22:00 AM

Thank you, William!

John Watt

Date: 12/5/2021 8:56:00 PM

Love this Kim, so funny and down-to-earth real. Enjoyed the title and graphic too. Congrats on your podium win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2021 9:05:00 PM

Thank you, John! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/5/2021 6:49:00 PM

Oh dear Kim! Hope there were no bruises, breaks or concussions! Just when we don't expect it, triumph turns into irony! Congratulations on your win!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2021 9:06:00 PM

Thank you, Sam! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/5/2021 6:39:00 PM

Your clever pen never fails you, Kim. A wonderfully ironic couplet, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2021 9:06:00 PM

Thank you, Susan! ~ hugs

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/5/2021 5:07:00 PM

Congratulations, Kim. This one elicited a hearty laugh. You might want to try writing for a comedian! (chuckling)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2021 5:14:00 PM

Thank you so much! :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/30/2021 9:26:00 PM

This is terrific! Good luck in Hank's contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2021 5:14:00 PM

Thank you!

Valsa George

Date: 11/30/2021 8:38:00 PM

This is indeed so funny ! After a death defying performance, slipping on the soap and falling is real tragedy!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2021 5:14:00 PM

Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/28/2021 8:34:00 AM

Dear Kim, thanks for the laugh. You walk a tight rope and slip on a piece of soap :) Hope you di not get hurt. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2021 10:35:00 AM

It’s all up in the air ;)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/28/2021 2:52:00 AM

Ha! Very funny and clever, Kim! Good luck in the contest…

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2021 6:30:00 AM

Thank you, Ilene!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/27/2021 6:53:00 PM

Now, That is Funny! What tremendous irony you've penned. Super contest entry, Kim. Have a blessed Sunday, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2021 8:30:00 PM

Thank you so much! Have a blessed Sunday too!

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/27/2021 6:19:00 PM

Kim, you've done something sarcastic and amusing! We regularly expect things to go one way in life, only to find ourselves in a different situation.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2021 8:31:00 PM

Truly! Thanks!