Roulette

ROULETTE

My twisted mind
Had everyone blind
No symptoms
Not a single sign!
 
I want to forget everything,
Living a life of no regrets,
Facing the sun
Ignoring my debts
Wiping of the cold sweat,
Taking another drink from my sweet tea set.

My life, a game of “RUSSIAN ROULETTE,”
there is no positive or negative.

A game of slip and slide,
Opened wide
Put a gun inside
Staring down the barrel
A quick pull trigger, gone sterile 
I give thanks to another day.

Madness, I've gone insane
Lots of money down the drain.
Initiated gum pops,
Broken lemons drops,
Tainted temples,
Upon another turn,
I dream of no shame!
Always saying 'NEVER!'
To this life, I scream “WHATEVER!"
HIT ME AGAIN! 

by;p.d

I wrote this poem, 
and dedicate the poem to my gambling addiction... 
ha ha, I miss it... he he he.... JK
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:22 PM
great poem. **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 2:49 PM
how funny. Without even realizing which poem I had come to the last one to leave you a note, I ended up at the same one today to talk to you again: well, Craig had helped me redo an old poem in Yoda "speak" but I felt that since I did not do it myself, I would just forget about it. If I had more time,I'd maybe try to work on something but wow, your contest is closing Sept. 6, huh? I hope you got a lot of good entries . If you did, your winner list will still look great!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 8:07 AM
thanks for saying I could enter it, but I am thinking people might see I did it and think bad about me, for entering it when the rules said not to. Anyway, I hope your contest fills quickly now. Have a great day, PD. I need to hurry off and get ready for work. Luv, Andrea
Seal Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 7:44 PM
I love the opening line lol, my kinda mind that is. Lady luck deserted me a long time ago, good thing. I've not posted anything new at mo so don't worry on me, I just like looking through yours. Take care, Richard
Martin Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 1:03 AM
Very nice poem. It Is an honor to share 1st place with you. (This is my fave of all the first place winners). Very nicely written with a lot of feeling and passion! Thank you for sharing! I would have given a rating but, don't know if 1 is best or 7 is best, lol! But would have given you the best one!
Minardi Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 11:06 AM
somehow this poem has its own dark side. enjoyed it very much, P.D. Congrats!!!
Pettit Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 11:20 PM
The majority of my experiences with gambling have been vicarious ones. As a dealer, I've seen what it does to others. I think to myself: "better them than me." Another fine write.
Ferry Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 10:45 PM
Myself, 20 years in Sin City. Know what it is like to bet it all. Tough addiction to conquer.............rick
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Congratulations on another outstanding win Linda. I sure do miss having time to read for hours every day...I miss so much..you sound so serious...
Hunter Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 6:16 AM
Excellent job PD and Congrats!....I'm only lucky at poker
Jordan Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 10:07 PM
I really do admire the way you write. And congratulations on the win. Jack
Essence Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 6:44 PM
Congratulations PD I really enjoyed this one :)
May Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 6:13 PM
great write and win PD...congrats
Liwayway Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations dear PD on your win with this very awesome poem of yours. Have a blessed day always. Hugs, Maria (^_^)
Richards Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 8:41 AM
A game of slip and slide.......as you slide into base with a home run.....Congrats on your winning poem!
Kriticos Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 4:29 PM
Amazing! I thoroughly enjoyed that. I can see why your poetry has so many views!
Guzzi Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 2:47 PM
harsh but so is the reality of many people very powerful write. Light & Love
Loving Iii Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:39 PM
some people never learn. john
Smalling Avatar
November 18, 2010 at 8:08 AM
The poem spins like the game, and a pure mastery of words took us inside to like this tragedy. Bravo!
Sullivan Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 6:23 AM
Really interesting! The thrill appears very tempting! Amzie
Locksley Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Not sure I understand it, but it was interesting to read. Read it a few times. If it's for one of the contests, good luck. Diane
Kapoor Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 1:47 AM
Another beautiful Poem showing your creative skills. A very cool and beautiful one my friend showing another amazing style of your writing. Many thanks for your precious comments on 'I Can Hear your Voice In My Heart'. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra...Poet D.
Galua Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 11:42 PM
interesting write Pd...that held my attention to the last...^_^ v
Davis Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Ahhhhh, now that's my kind of game! >) Very nice write!
Trevino Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 3:28 PM
the ending has me worried. crazy poem =(^.^)=
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