Rough Sleeping

Nobody told me freedom was so cold,
When I tore myself away
From the uneventful warmth
Of an ordinary family …

Thrashing about me in my confusion.
Wounding anyone who cared …
The tears slashing my mother’s face
Like razor blades …

But I had to get away.
Feel the wind of freedom …
Feel the wind …
I feel it now alright …

Icy blasts, straight down the river.
Eddying round the vast bulk
Of city buildings.
Over-warm … on the inside …

But huddled here, on the outside …
No real shelter in them …
That cruel freedom wind
Sifts through my thin clothes.

I remember warm jumpers,
And coats, abandoned
In my anxiety 
To catch the wind.

But I can’t go back 
Can I? … 
To that ordinary love
Of my ordinary home.

Not now I’ve felt the wind!
But, you see,
Nobody told me
Freedom is so cold …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/18/2009 5:33:00 PM
Much for the reader to think about here. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/14/2009 1:19:00 PM
Frances, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/13/2009 3:37:00 PM
What an amazing poem...such a life lesson in such beautiful poetry!! Well done, and congratulations on this being a featured work!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/13/2009 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations dear Frances on your featured poem. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2009 8:25:00 AM
KUDOS on this featured poem. I enjoyed reading it. More power and God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 7/12/2009 11:08:00 PM
Wow, Great flow of words, this is a very in piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke
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Date: 7/4/2009 7:49:00 AM
I would welcome advice on what form this poem is in. I only know that this is how it has to be ...
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Date: 7/4/2009 6:28:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Frances. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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