Rotgut

I'm stuck in the town of "Rotgut",
not far from San Antone!
I work in the "Silver Dollar",
a saloon, that's quite well known!

I'm what's known as the bar-keep,
I can't remember for how long?
It could be more than twenty years,
but, there agin I could be wrong!

There ain't much to do in Rotgut!
There really ain't much action!
In fact, the Silver Dollar,
seems to be the main attraction!

Danny's our piano man.
He loves to sit and play!
Our three Dance Hall girls are getting old
and have seen their better day!

Most nights, it's the same ole crowd,
doin' what gets done!
Jud and his pals, dealin' cards,
drinkin' beer and havin' fun!

Spanky, my ole hounddog,
lies sleepin' on the floor!
At the spot, he spends most all his time,
just inside the bars front door!

Usually, there's a stranger or two,
drinkin' at the bar!
If they're not stayin' in Rotgut,
we don't care, who they are!

Sheriff Dan, does check them out!
He lets them know this fact!
If troublemaking is their aim,
then get out, and don't come back!

That's Rotgut, as I see it!
Although, it cannot be denied,
it's a lonely, dirty, rundown place,
but, it's where us folks reside!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Locke Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 9:55 AM
Great stuff, well done Ralph!
Guzzi Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 3:04 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A. Sharma Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 4:02 AM
Great work Ralph ! Many congrats on ur first place win !
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 2:59 AM
- Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place, Ralph !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 10:00 PM
haha,,wonderful,,,congrats Tim
Johnson Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Nice to see you in a top spot Ralph. This was quite the challenge. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 4:18 PM
Thank you Joyce.
Gibson Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 2:55 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Jerry's contest.
Taylor Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 4:18 PM
Thanks, Faye.
Lindley Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 2:21 PM
Congrats on this worthy win!!! Enjoyable read.
Taylor Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 4:19 PM
Thanks, Bob.
Richards Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 1:25 PM
I can visualize it all........even seeing the dust-motes lingering in the sun coming in, a sleeping hound by the door, and the smell of the whiskey! What a descriptive write this is.......wonderful job, Ralph!
Taylor Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 4:20 PM
Thanks, Carrie - right back attcha!
Gasun Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 11:54 AM
A very awesome write my dear friend Ralph. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your top win! love and hugs, Leonora
Taylor Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Thanks, Leonora.
Rodgers Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 10:48 AM
A memorable ditty, congrats on your win.
Taylor Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 4:22 PM
Thanks, Dave.
Mehta Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 10:22 AM
A great write, congrats on the win, Ralph
Taylor Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Thank you, Dr Ram.
Eastman Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on the win... I could picture myself there.
Taylor Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Thank you Carol.
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 9:40 AM
dropping back with my congratulations:-) Hugs jan xx
Taylor Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 4:24 PM
Thank you, Jan.
Gorelick Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 2:10 AM
A great entry for the contest...See you round town..Hope thi does well in the contest. BG
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 6:16 PM
great entry good luck for the contest hugs jan xx
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