Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

Rosy

Sunset tints the sky a rosy hue,
       Where the lilac seas crash out of view,
   Pink cotton clouds beckon me to stay,
Where the white roar of the waves jet spray,

The sky and the sea meld into one,
   Magenta reflections of the sun,
        The water glitters all rouge and blush,
Just standing there makes my feelings gush,

How can I describe that twilight scene?
      Pale fuchsia fashioned sunbeams serene
   Mirrored on the lavender ocean ~
God’s hand in awe-inspiring motion.




10.05.2021



For Constance La France's ""R" contest, new or old" contest

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Sam Kauffman October 26, 2021 at 10:17 AM Brilliant with color and hues of God's sunset painting Jo. We are truly blessed that God paints beauty every day and we don't even have to go to a gallery! It's just there free as grace. Blessings. Congratulations on your win!

Karen Jones October 24, 2021 at 6:44 PM What wonderful imagery in both poem and photo!

Gordon Mcconnell October 17, 2021 at 1:14 PM Lovely piece of work Jo, nice rhyme and flow along with good imagery. Take care, Gordon

Jan Allison October 7, 2021 at 2:07 PM twilight beauty at its finest, many congratulations on your win Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Christuraj Alex October 7, 2021 at 9:51 AM "God’s hand in awe-inspiring motion." Your writing has wonderfully illustrated this truth. Congratulations!

Constance La France October 7, 2021 at 8:04 AM Jo, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this wonderful poem, so well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Chris Green October 5, 2021 at 9:38 AM Beautifully written Jo. The poem is prettier than the photo.

Demetrios Trifiatis October 5, 2021 at 7:40 AM This poem has been painted by sunset's golden light, dearest, Jo! Excellent! Hugs

Victor Buhagiar October 5, 2021 at 7:31 AM A wonderful poem with alliterations and imagery.

Vijay Pandit October 5, 2021 at 6:33 AM This a beautiful poem, Jo--wonderful colors in your inspiration.

Jenna Logan October 5, 2021 at 3:26 AM Hi Jo, you certainly have given credit where it's due. Your well descripted lines had me sitting on that beach, in awe of twilights beauty.

Kim Rodrigues October 5, 2021 at 3:23 AM Thank you for taking me away for a few minutes to meditate on the twilight sea! Great imagery, Jo!