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Rosy

Sunset tints the sky a rosy hue, Where the lilac seas crash out of view, Pink cotton clouds beckon me to stay, Where the white roar of the waves jet spray, The sky and the sea meld into one, Magenta reflections of the sun, The water glitters all rouge and blush, Just standing there makes my feelings gush, How can I describe that twilight scene? Pale fuchsia fashioned sunbeams serene Mirrored on the lavender ocean ~ God’s hand in awe-inspiring motion. 10.05.2021 For Constance La France's ""R" contest, new or old" contest

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Date: 10/26/2021 10:17:00 AM
Brilliant with color and hues of God's sunset painting Jo. We are truly blessed that God paints beauty every day and we don't even have to go to a gallery! It's just there free as grace. Blessings. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/24/2021 6:44:00 PM
What wonderful imagery in both poem and photo!
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Date: 10/17/2021 1:14:00 PM
Lovely piece of work Jo, nice rhyme and flow along with good imagery. Take care, Gordon
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Date: 10/7/2021 2:07:00 PM
twilight beauty at its finest, many congratulations on your win Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2021 9:51:00 AM
"God’s hand in awe-inspiring motion." Your writing has wonderfully illustrated this truth. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/7/2021 8:04:00 AM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this wonderful poem, so well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 10/5/2021 9:38:00 AM
Beautifully written Jo. The poem is prettier than the photo.
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Date: 10/5/2021 7:40:00 AM
This poem has been painted by sunset's golden light, dearest, Jo! Excellent! Hugs
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Date: 10/5/2021 7:31:00 AM
A wonderful poem with alliterations and imagery.
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Date: 10/5/2021 6:33:00 AM
This a beautiful poem, Jo--wonderful colors in your inspiration.
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Date: 10/5/2021 3:26:00 AM
Hi Jo, you certainly have given credit where it's due. Your well descripted lines had me sitting on that beach, in awe of twilights beauty.
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Date: 10/5/2021 3:23:00 AM
Thank you for taking me away for a few minutes to meditate on the twilight sea! Great imagery, Jo!
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