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Chapel stands grand through Time passing tones of message subLime pillars tale and the boxes chime.I can read you.Hear me dear from Air to Sine there.Winds change to complete a form 213 boxes shown 312 more Known. in Name. Young Nave, walked alone. Wave.High Approach. Alter Hear. Cc.left a note in the air.But eYeses do see Yes, by Way of Three.Ophi said wait. So I did. Master I saw and built the ground Four JourneyMen walk the Pillars Round. Prentice App ... Twisted Sister She.Kin.ah...hears a Twisted Whisper. Sly Rose... SO ;beautiful I couldn't miss her. There is know Apprentice.... Said the Prince. Prior.ET. Design.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/18/2009 9:09:00 AM

Wow, Izzy, this is quite a tale. Couldn't help think about the "JourneyMen" as time travelers. Somehow took me back to ancient Egypt when you spoke of the "apprentice" and the "Twisted Sister" and "Three.Ophi" made me think of the Oracle of Delphi. You certainly know how to twist my thoughts into creative forms. Wonderfully intriguing and obviously a launch pad to other times for me. Love it! Carolyn