Jeremy Smith Poet Monorhyme

Roses Are Red

Roses are red and so is my heart.
Just like the flower it's a work of art.
And every time you need to depart
My heart begins to crack and fall apart

Praying, for the moment you will return,
my heart lying ill from the concern.
There's, only one way to cure this yearn,
it's your love, which makes this fire burn.

My heart, weeps a flood of blood-red tears. 
when, the presence of your love is not near.
And, it pumps joyfully when you appear.
For your love, I hold so deeply dear.

If, you were to leave my heart would explode.
Forever losing, the gifts you bestowed.
I, refuse to allow our love to corrode.
Leaving my soul, forever widowed.

5/31/2017

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Anne-Lise Andresen June 3, 2017 at 4:00 PM - A really touching and beautiful writing, Jeremy - A lovely flow in your rhyming - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jeremy Smith June 3, 2017 at 4:02 PM Thank you, Sunshine :)

Jeremy Smith June 3, 2017 at 11:05 AM Thanks monorhyme and concrete are my best forms I think :)

Eve Roper June 3, 2017 at 11:03 AM Very nicely done and very heartfelt, Jeremy, the only monorhymes I have done are the ones that rhyme all the way down ~*

Akkina Downing June 1, 2017 at 7:46 PM Oh wow, this is beautiful indeed. A superb job done, Jeremy. I like it a lot :) Jeremy Smith June 1, 2017 at 11:26 PM Thank you, very much Akkina :)

Darren White June 1, 2017 at 3:24 AM Beautiful Jeremy, what White Wolf says, I like it a lot. Jeremy Smith June 1, 2017 at 5:03 AM Thanks Darren :)

White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 10:04 PM I really like this one, Jeremy! Well done mate Jeremy Smith May 31, 2017 at 10:06 PM Thanks a lot :) I, have been a love thing lately!