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Roses and Carnations

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Bouquet of roses espouses love of spouse Sentiments evoke memory that never dies Roses and carnations adorn a loving house Kiss of flowery scents flares romantic eyes Sentiments evoke memory that never dies Yellow roses proclaim friendship and joy Kiss of flowery scents flares romantic eyes Garden of carnations amorous souls enjoy Yellow roses proclaim friendship and joy White roses symbolize a brand new start Garden of carnations amorous souls enjoy Pink roses tug emotions of grateful heart White roses symbolize a brand new start Red roses shout with expressive greetings Pink roses tug emotions of grateful heart Roses and carnations love secret meetings Red roses shout with expressive greetings Gardens emanate scents blissfully pleasing Roses and carnations love secret meetings Emissary of love emerges playfully teasing Gardens emanate scents blissfully pleasing Roses and carnations adorn a loving house Emissary of love emerges playfully teasing Bouquet of roses espouses love of spouse First Place October 5, 2017 Roses and Carnations Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver

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Valsa George

Date: 6/21/2023 9:53:00 PM

Pantoum is the most difficult poetic form for me. You have written a beautiful poem on Roses and Carnations.... two of my most favorite flowers. As ever, a lovely poem so full of beauty and fragrance.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/13/2017 11:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your well-earned win in Julie's contest, Vijay - keep up the great writing! :-)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/14/2017 5:28:00 AM

Thank you Greg!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/12/2017 7:45:00 PM

Returning with congrats Vijay on your top win with your enchanting poem!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 10:04:00 PM

Thank you Susan!

Kishan Sharma

Date: 10/12/2017 2:14:00 AM

Congratulations vijay for first place win so beautiful writing,,

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 5:28:00 AM

Thank you Kishan!

Constance La France

Date: 10/11/2017 7:29:00 PM

Vijay, so wonderfully penned, love your poem, and congratulations on your win !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 5:28:00 AM

Thank you BW!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/11/2017 7:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 5:27:00 AM

Thank you Eve!

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/11/2017 2:38:00 PM

Such a lovely, well-written Pantoum, Vijay. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/11/2017 4:38:00 PM

Thank you Sandra!

Frances Schiavina

Date: 10/11/2017 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations! I am happy for your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/11/2017 4:38:00 PM

Thank you Frances!

Roy Pett

Date: 10/10/2017 12:28:00 PM

Absolutely wonderful, really like this beautiful Pantoum Vijay, your such a talented poet, GL in contest. :))

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/10/2017 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Roy.. appreciate your comments!

James Swartz

Date: 10/8/2017 12:37:00 AM

Great piece! You chose the right words and the rhyme is perfect. Good luck!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2017 5:56:00 AM

Thank you James!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2017 8:42:00 PM

I am seeing some really nice pantoum poetry around here and this one is no exception. Way to do it with the roses and carnations theme. Those flowers indeed have special meaning.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2017 6:40:00 AM

Many thanks Andrea!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/6/2017 11:09:00 AM

Lovely, Vijay! I love that it is love of spouse , and “playfully teasing” GL in contest!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2017 11:20:00 AM

Thank you Kim--appreciate your comments!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/6/2017 7:27:00 AM

This is such a romantic and pleasing write my friend! I surely loved the sentimentality of this incredible poem Vijay! You have written about the colors of roses quite elegantly and rhymed your piece with masterful skill! What a grandiose write, Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2017 8:29:00 AM

Thank you Russell--appreciate your comments!

Maria Williams

Date: 10/6/2017 4:38:00 AM

So romantic Vijay, good luck in the contest....Maria

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2017 5:58:00 AM

Thank you Maria!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/5/2017 8:21:00 PM

A Pantoum of lovely rhyme and rhythm Vijay. Beautifully expressed with wonderful imagery. Good luck in the contest!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2017 9:37:00 PM

Thank you Susan...appreciate your comments!

Joseph May

Date: 10/5/2017 6:20:00 PM

Beautifully expressed Vijay...best wishes

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2017 7:05:00 PM

Thank you Joseph!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/5/2017 4:45:00 PM

a blossom of fine words gracefully knitted, vijay... fine stuff!...huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2017 4:58:00 PM

Thank you nette!

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/5/2017 3:37:00 PM

Tough form done very well Vijay, best wishes in the contest...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2017 4:03:00 PM

Thank you Charlie!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/5/2017 1:08:00 PM

This magnificent piece is just as beautiful as a wonderful bouquet of roses! I love the amazing personification, imagery, form and flow of your words - just so lovely! I am sure it will do very well in the contest! Best wishes. Pandita

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2017 1:19:00 PM

Many thanks for your visit--I enjoyed reading your comments, appreciate your kind words!

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/5/2017 9:39:00 AM

Wow beautiful and well written Vijay. I love how the red roses shout. That line stands out. Good luck in the contest :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2017 12:08:00 PM

Thank you Heidi--hope the project is going well for you!

Silent One

Date: 10/5/2017 6:36:00 AM

You have mastered the pantoum, you are still the mater of rhyme.. I love how your poems flows so well.. Another excellent poem, this should do well in the contest..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2017 12:08:00 PM

Many thanks Silent One!