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Roses

Lo, the Roses which bloom in my garden, bright I tend them with love and care day and night These roses gladden me all through the day That my verse on roses, before you, gleefully I lay Amid stinging thorns and the cover of leafy green Their frilled beauty is sometimes veiled unseen But as the wind croons all day in their ear Their sweet fragrance wafts through morning air August.25.2022 ~Placed Third~ Eight Lines of Rhyme- Your Favorite Flower Poetry Contest Sponsor- Tania Kitchin
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Fowler Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 6:58 AM
Love this beautiful rhyme Valsa. Is the picture of your garden? Congratulations on your win! Linda
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely poem!
Baker Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 2:07 PM
I could smell the roses my friend. :-) A pleasant read and good entry for the contest, Valsa. Good luck! Bill
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 11:03 PM
Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, Valsa, especially roses, just let your eyes do the holding--nicely penned as always, and my best to you my friend, Aloha~William
Meadows Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 11:25 PM
A lovely poem about roses. Well done.
Leffanta Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 11:25 AM
I may never understand the attraction of roses, but they certainly bring joy to aphids! Roses are THE favourite food of mule and whitetail deer! Good luck in the contest! Aloha!
Poet Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 11:08 AM
Valsa, Your words blossom throughout this lovely poem much like the loveroses. Best wishes for a win
Buhagiar Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 10:41 AM
Most flowers are fragrant, but the rose is in additional attraction.
Pandit Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 4:36 AM
Your words bloom like roses in this beautiful poem, Valsa. Best to you.
May Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 1:37 AM
Lovely write Valsa, Best wishes in the Contest
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