Roses

Roses of my heart be still and allow me to inhale the Odorous scent of your fashioned beauty and charm Scintillating in red you bring me the vibrancy of your Elective bud. I love your thorns as well for they Say to the world, " Handle with care" , Oh! Rose,

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/18/2019 4:07:00 AM

Roses (even Mystic Roses) are a great source for inspiration, Vienna:) Your Acrostic has been a delight to read...love the ending! ~ Warm regards /x/ paul

Frances Byrne

Date: 8/16/2019 9:06:00 PM

Hi Pixie, Wonderful, Frances

Lu Loo

Date: 8/16/2019 11:28:00 AM

oh I sure love my white roses! Beautiful acrostic perfect Pixie :) My daughter's middle name is Ella Rose so I love this. Thanks for sharing :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2019 8:16:00 AM

- Beautiful roses, Pixie ... always, handle with care :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/14/2019 9:51:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poem, Pixie! Great acrostic. Blessings, Kim

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/15/2019 5:18:00 AM

Thank you Kim, Blessings

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/14/2019 5:21:00 PM

A charming write, Pixie: Scintillating in red you bring me the vibrancy of your Elective bud.I love your thorns as well for they Say to the world, " Handle with care" , Oh! Rose,...so special a write, my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/15/2019 5:18:00 AM

Thanks for reading Vijay

Jan Allison

Date: 8/14/2019 5:07:00 PM

oh Pixie this is a lovely acrostic, i especially love the final 2 lines:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/15/2019 5:17:00 AM

Thank you Jan for commenting .