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Rose Petals

As the rose petals float downward Like new fallen snow upon soil The vine looks to the sun upward Waits patiently for sun rain no toil Cleariing my mind of all clutter Feast on eye candy in garden Walking like butterfly flutter Beauty surrounds scene lifts burden Captured away in the spirit Visit nature on Holy realm Come to nature God promerit Each day there is beauty like Elm Or this morning fireball red sun Rising on eastern horizon Waterdroplets infused rose scent stun Nature's gift on heart emblazon

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James Foulk

Date: 5/18/2011 1:07:00 PM

very beautiful write. i love poetry about nature and roses. thank you for commenting on Under the Old Elm Tree.

Ismael Nieves

Date: 5/12/2011 2:15:00 PM

HEY! I love that scenery....sound like the Garden of Eden.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/12/2011 10:58:00 AM

glowing you are, sara! such a radiant piece with descriptive, flowing images.. i likey! :) huggs, nette

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/12/2011 11:18:00 AM

Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2011 10:34:00 AM

Being surrounded by nature always makes me feel closer to God, Sara. You gave us some beautifully imagery as well as spiritual inspiration in this wonderful poem. Love, Carolyn

Don Johnson

Date: 5/11/2011 3:38:00 PM

Delightful thought Sarah to be at one with nature the butterfly flaps by the grass so verdant green itself is such an high xo Don

Miesha ....Lovey

Date: 5/11/2011 1:59:00 PM

great peom