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Rose On the Vine

She denied him ...
her first true love, yet she would not speak him
the reason so absurdly trifling that
it was gone from her memory ... completely
still, she clung to it like a bible
not a thought given to
his name or care or visage
in many a year ...
death danced before her now
its countenance mocking her age and illnesses
husband of fifty-something years
and three children
all about her, smiling ... putting on "the face"
of expectancy and acceptance
almost as if it was her obligation to make them feel better
about her own death ...
she giggled quietly at the irony
a full life of love and family and travel and ...
and yet ...
the only thing she could see now was his face
all their voices were his voice
the air was filled with his cologne
his hand holding the perfectly-matched spaces in hers
the taste in her mouth, his tender bow of lips ...
"My sweet love" she said softly, her husband smiling
(though it was not him she was speaking to)
"Forgive me ..."
a puzzled look creeping onto her family's faces ...
at this, she gently closed her eyes
letting the darkness wash over her, a warm blanket
dreaming of the life she might have had
and one more gaze ...
her lost love's shining eyes.






~ Poem Of The Week ~  on Poetry Soup, from September 20, 2020 to September 26, 2020 - thank you, Admins!
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Marc Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Congrats on a well deserved poem of the week. Turning back to her first True love ~ may she rest in peace :)
Kauffman Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 8:22 PM
The great "if only's" of a lost love perfectly articulated, Gregory, drawing us into the last moments - the last breath. Congratulations on your sad, yet poignant POTW.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 1:40 PM
Congratulations on your POTW win. WOW!!! What a story/write. Your pen was writing overtime with this one. Enjoy your win.............
Hamilton Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 7:24 AM
This is great writing G, so many familial details makes it seem like a true life experience, only you can weave a web of intrigue like this.
Nicole Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 5:49 PM
"Rose on the Vine" When I think of this, so many thoughts linger. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. just "one more gaze ... " into "her lost love's shining eyes" I can feel her heart. Your heart in every word. Congratulations Greg, on Poem of the Week. Your thoughts caress gently around me. Hugs, Brandy
Watt Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 4:27 PM
A great big congratulations for the POTW selection, Greg. Awesome writing that deserves the honor!
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 3:04 PM
OMG, this is absolutely amazing. FAVE!!!
La France Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Greg, congratulations on POTW with this amazing write, so emotional and well done, a FAV for me _Constance
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 5:20 AM
Powerful emotions, Greg..the final words were reserved for her first love..congrats on poem of the week.
Kitchin Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 4:54 AM
Greg, an excellent captivating emotive poem, your poems often leave me wanting part 2, Congratulations on POTW!
Watt Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 9:39 AM
Terrific writing, Greg. There are mysteries behind her eyelids that can only be hinted at. What memories she feels must be hidden from her children. The wash of emotions over the 'what ifs' of life, knowing that life was wonderful just as it turned out. Evocative, mysterious, slightly ambiguous writing, which you excel at. Blessings ~ John
Deepa Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Such a poignant write dear Gregory sir.. each lines dripping pure emotions..Death knocking door..ironical one..! I believe your doing well.I am going to FAVE your splendid work:-)Keep inspiring..Take care sir. Warm regards sent your way..
Lindley Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 3:23 AM
This to me is exquisite poetry. Has the depths, the beauty, the emotional feel of a real life story. And such is very hard to put into ink. A truly exceptional poem my friend. And one that expresses a sad reality that is far too common in life. A fav... God bless...
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