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Rose Garden

Rose blossoms divine~ splendor exuding delight, Ebullient is their stance, colorful is their profile, Ecstatically they rise, flaunting exuberant smile; Grandeur flower-bouquets charming your sight Lauding scented whiffs fragrant blooms impart As silken petals unfold, lip-synching your heart. Upon arched trellis dazzles honey-gold royal rose Forming vibrant arc of winsome welcome-pose, Charming realm of crimson, scarlet, coral, themes~ Seductive blooms enchanting passionate dreams, Standing tall on long-stems wallowing in sunrise Romancing love-vibes beaming through your eyes. Bountiful clusters tout reddish-purple fuchsia blush Oscillating rosy-buds to lyrical melodies of thrush Where, chasing nectar, bees and butterflies rush, While daydreams-enamored, clasping silence hush, Reveling indulgent stimulus in cooing hints of dove Strumming in our hearts mellifluous music of love. March 14, 2022 Placed 1st: A Brian Strand 1095 Placed 2nd: Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/18/2023 10:02:00 AM

A gorgeous poem about the rose garden where nature's music of love is heard. Belated congratulations.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/4/2022 7:32:00 PM

Wow Vijay, this is one I missed! Your imagery excels in this lovely entry. Congratulations on your deserving win. Blessings xxoo

Deb M

Date: 4/21/2022 9:01:00 PM

Vijay…… the way you see, describe and put into words is just magical. An excellent example with this amazing and “so beautiful poem”. Debx

Valsa George

Date: 4/21/2022 6:15:00 AM

I knew this poem would be in the winners list. Hearty Congratulations, dear friend !

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/20/2022 7:30:00 PM

Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 4/20/2022 6:10:00 PM

Thank you for your submission and congratulations on your high placing win in the Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest Vijay! :) <3 ~BJ

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/30/2022 12:41:00 PM

Well done Vijay, full of great word scenery Well so it seems; to me..'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2022 2:58:00 PM

Big congratulations. This is a rose colored jewel

Silent One

Date: 3/27/2022 3:06:00 PM

As a poetic gardener I love this poem with so many great verses with vivid imagery...Great use of words

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2022 1:41:00 PM

Thank you, SO.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/27/2022 12:33:00 PM

Hear, hear this is a write of pure creativity, fantastic flow of words, wonderfully scented flowers, stupendous color and, mix into this an enormous amount of talent, and voila, you get a magical poem, POET - Vijay Pandit. Kudos my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2022 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer.

Bill Baker

Date: 3/26/2022 4:19:00 PM

So much color and energy, Vijay. I love it. Great entry! I gave my wife some roses this week, she loves them. It's one of the few things I can still smell as I age. Thanks for an enjoyable read, Bill I see below congratulations are in order. WTG Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2022 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Bill.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/26/2022 6:46:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your well-deserved win, Vijay. Kindest regards and blessings dear friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/28/2022 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Lasaad.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/25/2022 10:04:00 PM

A very lovely painting of rose garden. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2022 1:14:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj--much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/25/2022 12:59:00 PM

Your garden sounds like heaven on earth, Vijay: You have painted a beautiful sight with words. A sure winner. Best, SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2022 1:14:00 PM

Thank you SuZ--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/25/2022 11:46:00 AM

Wow! This is amazing! So well written and brings me right into depth of the poem. A FAVE :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2022 1:13:00 PM

So glad to hear that my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks and delighted by your FAVE. Many thanks, Heidi.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/23/2022 9:22:00 AM

Another masterpiece, Vijay--with vivid descriptions and appealing personification. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2022 1:12:00 PM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/18/2022 5:43:00 AM

Ahhh!! I enjoyed reading this one. The rhymes are very good. The couplets outstanding. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent there. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/22/2022 2:14:00 PM

Thank you Sara. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Anil Deo

Date: 3/17/2022 7:09:00 PM

Stana 3, as Harry Horsmans noted, stands a little taller. I have yet 2 recall a sub-par write from Vijay Ji's pen, kudos. Question: u have several rose types? One pair of lines refer to a trellis, more for the creeper variety?

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/18/2022 5:07:00 AM

All of the above through many years. Much appreciate, Anil. Many thanks.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/16/2022 11:44:00 PM

Vijay, my simple wild garden of zinnias and sunflowers has paled in comparison to your magnificent splendor of the beautiful flowers you have penned in your poem! I guess I need to go visit other parts of the world, I'm getting a tad jealous ;) Such a lovely poem! <3 ~BJ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/18/2022 5:06:00 AM

My wife loves roses of all kinds. She is the gardener of the family. Much appreciate your kind remarks, BJ. Many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/16/2022 11:23:00 AM

I think I'll visit your garden and stay there for a very long sejours. Beautifully penned, lost in the perfume of your thoughts Vijay, Winning wishes ,

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/16/2022 12:55:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Vienna.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/16/2022 7:26:00 AM

Vijay, you've written a fantastic poem. Throughout the piece, there are wonderful analogies. And flower petals sway to the rhythm of warblers... What a breathtaking sight that would be. The writing was enjoyable to read, and best of luck in the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/16/2022 7:30:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad. Much appreciate your insights.

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/16/2022 6:30:00 AM

Vijay, your garden of roses does definitely inspire! I once had a climbing rose called Blaze and your wonderful imagery brought back to me such beautiful memories that I could once again smell their fragrant dew! Happy Wednesday !!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/16/2022 7:29:00 AM

So very kind of you Mike. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 3/16/2022 5:59:00 AM

Oh my!!!! What a wonderful poem!!! Splendid imagery throughout... Rose buds oscillate to melodies of thrushes... How beautiful it would be!!! Enjoyed reading this... A winner for sure...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/16/2022 7:29:00 AM

Much appreciate Supraja--special from a nature lover. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/15/2022 6:08:00 PM

"As silken petals unfold, lip-synching your heart" A breathtaking moment to behold indeed. This is beautiful, dreamy and so romantic. Playful and passionate as well. Your thoughts tangle around me and I'm softly smiling. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/16/2022 7:28:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Always a treat to read your insights. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2022 4:44:00 PM

Roses are certainly gorgeous. Just like this poem

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/16/2022 7:27:00 AM

many thanks Andrea. Much appreciate.