Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Rose Garden

Rose blossoms divine~ splendor exuding delight,
Ebullient is their stance, colorful is their profile,
Ecstatically they rise, flaunting exuberant smile;
Grandeur flower-bouquets charming your sight
Lauding scented whiffs fragrant blooms impart
As silken petals unfold, lip-synching your heart.

Upon arched trellis dazzles honey-gold royal rose
Forming vibrant arc of winsome welcome-pose,
Charming realm of crimson, scarlet, coral, themes~
Seductive blooms enchanting passionate dreams,
Standing tall on long-stems wallowing in sunrise
Romancing love-vibes beaming through your eyes.

Bountiful clusters tout reddish-purple fuchsia blush
Oscillating rosy-buds to lyrical melodies of thrush
Where, chasing nectar, bees and butterflies rush,
While daydreams-enamored, clasping silence hush,
Reveling indulgent stimulus in cooing hints of dove
Strumming in our hearts mellifluous music of love.

March 14, 2022
Placed 1st: A Brian Strand 1095
Placed 2nd: Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest
Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

1 2

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 18, 2023 at 10:02 AM A gorgeous poem about the rose garden where nature's music of love is heard. Belated congratulations.

Connie Marcum Wong June 4, 2022 at 7:32 PM Wow Vijay, this is one I missed! Your imagery excels in this lovely entry. Congratulations on your deserving win. Blessings xxoo

Deb M April 21, 2022 at 9:01 PM Vijay…… the way you see, describe and put into words is just magical. An excellent example with this amazing and “so beautiful poem”. Debx

Valsa George April 21, 2022 at 6:15 AM I knew this poem would be in the winners list. Hearty Congratulations, dear friend !

Christuraj Alex April 20, 2022 at 7:30 PM Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!

Bj Legros Kelley April 20, 2022 at 6:10 PM Thank you for your submission and congratulations on your high placing win in the Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest Vijay! :) <3 ~BJ

Joe Maverick March 30, 2022 at 12:41 PM Well done Vijay, full of great word scenery Well so it seems; to me..'

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2022 at 2:58 PM Big congratulations. This is a rose colored jewel

Silent One March 27, 2022 at 3:06 PM As a poetic gardener I love this poem with so many great verses with vivid imagery...Great use of words Vijay Pandit March 28, 2022 at 1:41 PM Thank you, SO.

Jennifer Proxenos March 27, 2022 at 12:33 PM Hear, hear this is a write of pure creativity, fantastic flow of words, wonderfully scented flowers, stupendous color and, mix into this an enormous amount of talent, and voila, you get a magical poem, POET - Vijay Pandit. Kudos my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit March 28, 2022 at 1:40 PM Thank you Jennifer.

Bill Baker March 26, 2022 at 4:19 PM So much color and energy, Vijay. I love it. Great entry! I gave my wife some roses this week, she loves them. It's one of the few things I can still smell as I age. Thanks for an enjoyable read, Bill I see below congratulations are in order. WTG Vijay! Vijay Pandit March 28, 2022 at 1:40 PM Thank you Bill.

Sotto Poet March 26, 2022 at 6:46 AM Back with congratulations on your well-deserved win, Vijay. Kindest regards and blessings dear friend. Vijay Pandit March 28, 2022 at 1:40 PM Thank you Lasaad.

Christuraj Alex March 25, 2022 at 10:04 PM A very lovely painting of rose garden. Beautiful. Congratulations! Vijay Pandit March 26, 2022 at 1:14 PM Thank you Christuraj--much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney March 25, 2022 at 12:59 PM Your garden sounds like heaven on earth, Vijay: You have painted a beautiful sight with words. A sure winner. Best, SuZ Vijay Pandit March 26, 2022 at 1:14 PM Thank you SuZ--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Heidi Sands March 25, 2022 at 11:46 AM Wow! This is amazing! So well written and brings me right into depth of the poem. A FAVE :) Vijay Pandit March 26, 2022 at 1:13 PM So glad to hear that my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks and delighted by your FAVE. Many thanks, Heidi.

Janice Canerdy March 23, 2022 at 9:22 AM Another masterpiece, Vijay--with vivid descriptions and appealing personification. Janice Vijay Pandit March 26, 2022 at 1:12 PM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick March 18, 2022 at 5:43 AM Ahhh!! I enjoyed reading this one. The rhymes are very good. The couplets outstanding. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent there. Sara Vijay Pandit March 22, 2022 at 2:14 PM Thank you Sara. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Anil Deo March 17, 2022 at 7:09 PM Stana 3, as Harry Horsmans noted, stands a little taller. I have yet 2 recall a sub-par write from Vijay Ji's pen, kudos. Question: u have several rose types? One pair of lines refer to a trellis, more for the creeper variety? Vijay Pandit March 18, 2022 at 5:07 AM All of the above through many years. Much appreciate, Anil. Many thanks.

Bj Legros Kelley March 16, 2022 at 11:44 PM Vijay, my simple wild garden of zinnias and sunflowers has paled in comparison to your magnificent splendor of the beautiful flowers you have penned in your poem! I guess I need to go visit other parts of the world, I'm getting a tad jealous ;) Such a lovely poem! <3 ~BJ Vijay Pandit March 18, 2022 at 5:06 AM My wife loves roses of all kinds. She is the gardener of the family. Much appreciate your kind remarks, BJ. Many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose March 16, 2022 at 11:23 AM I think I'll visit your garden and stay there for a very long sejours. Beautifully penned, lost in the perfume of your thoughts Vijay, Winning wishes , Vijay Pandit March 16, 2022 at 12:55 PM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Vienna.

Sotto Poet March 16, 2022 at 7:26 AM Vijay, you've written a fantastic poem. Throughout the piece, there are wonderful analogies. And flower petals sway to the rhythm of warblers... What a breathtaking sight that would be. The writing was enjoyable to read, and best of luck in the contest. Vijay Pandit March 16, 2022 at 7:30 AM Thank you, Lasaad. Much appreciate your insights.

Mike Gentile March 16, 2022 at 6:30 AM Vijay, your garden of roses does definitely inspire! I once had a climbing rose called Blaze and your wonderful imagery brought back to me such beautiful memories that I could once again smell their fragrant dew! Happy Wednesday !! Vijay Pandit March 16, 2022 at 7:29 AM So very kind of you Mike. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Supraja Kannan March 16, 2022 at 5:59 AM Oh my!!!! What a wonderful poem!!! Splendid imagery throughout... Rose buds oscillate to melodies of thrushes... How beautiful it would be!!! Enjoyed reading this... A winner for sure... Vijay Pandit March 16, 2022 at 7:29 AM Much appreciate Supraja--special from a nature lover. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole March 15, 2022 at 6:08 PM "As silken petals unfold, lip-synching your heart" A breathtaking moment to behold indeed. This is beautiful, dreamy and so romantic. Playful and passionate as well. Your thoughts tangle around me and I'm softly smiling. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit March 16, 2022 at 7:28 AM Thank you my friend. Always a treat to read your insights. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always.

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2022 at 4:44 PM Roses are certainly gorgeous. Just like this poem Vijay Pandit March 16, 2022 at 7:27 AM many thanks Andrea. Much appreciate.

1 2