Rose Capulet

What’s in a name? that which we call a rose
By Any Other Name would smell as sweet

Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare

ROSE CAPULET

Put aside the rose by any other name, the dozen scent
of lover’s potent petals, exacting thorns that pierce the skin.
His soulmate’s countenance - like baby’s breath and intent.
Her pink pinched cheeks, soft as velvet, a bright budding win.

The lovely romance of Capulet adorned with thrilling furl.
Sweetness permeates from Shakespeare’s intervening,
phrase caught betwixt the feuding, an idyllic poetic pearl.
Cruel cessation of fluttering heartbeats - unforeseen things.

Juliet’s petals still - like Aurora’s lips longed to be kissed.*
Her Romeo clueless to her pretense downs caustic curse.
His rapturous love awakens — wan rose can only coexist
in the arms of death. Dagger turns rose red in abiding verse.

11/14/2021
Robert Liguori’s Rose Contest

*Aurora was the name of the fairytale’s Sleeping Beauty who was awakened by her prince with a kiss. Juliet was in a temporary coma
but Romeo never received her explanation letter.
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George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 2:14 AM
You have given a classic Shakesperean nucleus to your poem ! Congratulations on your great win, Kim !
Daniel Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 9:44 PM
Wow! You have penned a beauty that captures the Shakespearean tale exactly, Kim, amazing congratulations:)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 4:24 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Kauffman Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Kim, you have captured the pathos, the ache of if only and irony of this classic Shakespearean tragedy in the metaphor of the rose. So well done. Congratulations and blessings. Hope you and your family are doing well. Sending you continued prayers and blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 1:25 PM
Thank you kindly, Sam xx
Peck Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Kim, that is just wonderful writing! I love wan rose can only coexist in the arms of death...Congratulations on your First Place win!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Thank you, Ann! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "ROSE CAPULET" is a beautiful story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings....................
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Thank you, Paula! :)
Alex Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 7:37 AM
"Juliet’s petals still - like Aurora’s lips longed to be kissed.* Her Romeo clueless to her pretense downs caustic curse." - Great connect. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Thank you, Christuraj! :)
Calasibetta Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations on your win! A beautiful classic that you have cleverly composed as your own. Lovely!!! Blessings, Paulette
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Shakespeare lends his classic in many variations. Thank you, Paulette!
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 3:50 PM
wow, you did SO well with the Rose theme. You took a classic story and wrote a classic and classy sounding poem on it!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 6:02 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! xx
Mcintosh Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 6:46 AM
So lovely. Enjoyed so much. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 6:03 PM
Thank you, sweet Gina xx
Buhagiar Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 6:41 AM
Long ago I had to read Romeo and Juliet a few times for my finals. It always left a heart ache behind. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 7:22 AM
Those star-crossed lovers
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