Rose

"A thorn defends the rose, harming only those who would steal the blossom," Chinese proverb ------------------------------------------------- alternate leaves, serrated margin prickles all along, sickle like hooks green with envy of blooming flower stem, peduncle, sepal watch over breath of gods, sent sample of heaven

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/16/2025 11:14:00 AM

Hello Thriveni Musore, Roses are a beautiful flower. it has shades of black, beige, red nd yellow. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/17/2025 10:40:00 AM

Hello Thriveni Musore, Your welcome my friend. Enjoy the day. Love & Light, /Darlene/

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/17/2025 2:21:00 AM

Your kind visit brings me joy dear poet, Thank you very much.

Valsa George

Date: 3/16/2025 5:57:00 AM

Beautiful and meaningful lines. Flowers are the breath of Gods and bring down Heaven to earth. Congratulations Thriveni on your win.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/17/2025 2:19:00 AM

I am glad you liked this dear friend. Thank you for the kind visit and sweet words. thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/15/2025 3:24:00 PM

Your poem has elegance and beauty, like the flower. Congratulations on your win, Thriveni. :)

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/15/2025 9:52:00 PM

like the flower! that is so sweet of you dear poet, thank you so much for your kind visit and blessings. Thank you.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/15/2025 1:16:00 PM

Those are five beautiful lines, the picture and poem are exquisite. Congratulations on your win.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/15/2025 9:52:00 PM

Thank you for your pleasant visit and kind words dear poet, means so much to me. Thank you for the blessings.

Lin Lane

Date: 3/15/2025 11:45:00 AM

Nice job to have your lines on the winning list. Congrats, thriveni.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/15/2025 9:51:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am delighted, thank you for the blessings.

Jim Healey

Date: 3/15/2025 9:50:00 AM

Very vivid description. Excellent. Congrats on your winning placement. Well done.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/15/2025 9:49:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. your words brings me cheer, thank you so much.

Marilene Evans

Date: 3/15/2025 9:44:00 AM

Congratulations, Thriveni! Such a vivid imagery. Blessings.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/15/2025 9:48:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind visit and sweet words dear poet, Thank you for the blessings. very much indeed.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 3/15/2025 5:05:00 AM

Congratulations on this your well-deserved win.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/15/2025 8:01:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit dear friend. Thank you for your sweet time and words. cheers!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2025 2:41:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful win poem, thriveni :) - hugs

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/15/2025 8:00:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind visit and sweet words dear friend. Hugs & cheers!!!

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 3/14/2025 11:42:00 PM

Congratulations, friend, on your high placement in this poetry contest with a unique style of your own. Wish you a pleasant weekend.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/15/2025 2:14:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit and sweet words, I am so glad I could make it to the list dear poet. Thank you for the blessings dear friend. Cheers!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2025 3:37:00 PM

Lovely work!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/14/2025 6:17:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit and words dear poet. Brightens my day. Thank you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/14/2025 10:22:00 AM

Loved your imagery, Best for a win.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/14/2025 6:16:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. Thank you for the good wishes, blessings. Thank you.