Rose

ROSE Here I am at break of dawn Just me, my rod and my friend fawn who stares at me as he did before he knows I’ll leave with just my lore I lost my Rose a year ago and spend my thoughts in deep compose dispensing with my time of woes and time is wilting like a rose Free Verse or Rhyme Poetry Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper May 4, 2019 #3

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/10/2019 5:02:00 PM

Hi Darlene: A beautiful poem about the Falls. I have been there many times and you can see people from all over the world. My compliments!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/10/2019 5:02:00 PM

Hi Darlene: A beautiful poem about the Falls. I have been there many times and you can see people from all over the world. My compliments!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/10/2019 1:34:00 PM

Hello Ralph, your Rose is waitng for you. One day you will be with her. gave a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/11/2019 10:30:00 AM

Oh! It felt real to me that is why i said what I said. I like roses to. have a nice day my friend.

Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/10/2019 8:13:00 PM

Thank you for your thought Darlene but it was fiction.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/24/2019 11:34:00 AM

Nicely composed Ralph. Congrats.

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/24/2019 12:10:00 PM

Thank you , Anisha

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/15/2019 1:40:00 PM

Thank you very much, nette!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/15/2019 1:05:00 PM

you shine with this fine write, ralph... sweet congrats and huggs!

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/18/2019 9:04:00 PM

carpe diem done over

Charles Messina

Date: 5/13/2019 8:59:00 PM

Wonderful write, Ralph. Congrats on your win. CM

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/14/2019 11:53:00 AM

Thanks, Charlie It's always a challenge to mention a tragedy in a short stanza.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/13/2019 4:51:00 PM

a lovely interpretation of the image Ralph, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/18/2019 9:04:00 PM

carpe diem done over

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/14/2019 11:54:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. My prayerful wishes for your hubby.

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/13/2019 4:31:00 PM

'A rose by any other name'...lovely verse my friend...happy roses...^WW^

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/13/2019 4:49:00 PM

thank you, WW!

Joseph May

Date: 5/12/2019 7:02:00 PM

Fishing becomes a healing balm...Congrats on your win Ralph

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2019 1:40:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Ralph :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/11/2019 9:40:00 PM

Hi Ralph, You've penned a good entry for theme. It works well with # 3. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2019 6:13:00 PM

very nicely done, Ralph. I almost went with that picture too. That picture can lend itself to different thoughts, but for sure, solitude.

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/10/2019 4:29:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea: That's true.Solitude and thoughts.