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Date written: 12/03/2022

firmly rooted to a spot with eyes stitched shut. lost in a sublime sweet serenity; swallowed whole by stillness. tired mind traveling far from the maddening crowd to finally repose as time grows feet and takes off running. moments, all cares of today, remnants of yesterday ploddingly drift away like billowing smoke. the velvety-soft sound of breath piercing through the silence. the mind's eye searching for peace deep within. all that matters... now.

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Date: 12/11/2022 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Edward! Lovely poem.. . "swallowed whole by stillness..." I love.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/12/2022 4:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ann:-)
Date: 12/6/2022 7:22:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your reflections, wisely and beautifully expressed through your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/7/2022 4:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Beata:-) Happy holidays!
Date: 12/5/2022 8:15:00 PM
Another level! Exquisitely penned, Edward. Warmest congratulations on your win. Thanks for sharing.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/6/2022 5:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Seeker:-) Most obliged.
Date: 12/5/2022 5:44:00 AM
That is the power of silence, mind, meditation. Apt for the theme, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/6/2022 5:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-)

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