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Date written: 12/03/2022

firmly rooted to a spot
with eyes stitched shut.
lost in a sublime 
sweet serenity; 
swallowed whole
by stillness.
tired mind traveling
far from the maddening crowd 
to finally repose
as time grows feet 
and takes off running.
moments,
all cares of today, 
remnants of yesterday 
ploddingly drift away 
like billowing smoke.
the velvety-soft sound
of breath 
piercing through 
the silence.
the mind's eye 
searching 
for peace deep within.
all that matters...
now.

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Date: 12/11/2022 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Edward! Lovely poem.. . "swallowed whole by stillness..." I love.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/12/2022 4:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ann:-)
Date: 12/6/2022 7:22:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your reflections, wisely and beautifully expressed through your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/7/2022 4:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Beata:-) Happy holidays!
Date: 12/5/2022 8:15:00 PM
Another level! Exquisitely penned, Edward. Warmest congratulations on your win. Thanks for sharing.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/6/2022 5:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Seeker:-) Most obliged.
Date: 12/5/2022 5:44:00 AM
That is the power of silence, mind, meditation. Apt for the theme, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/6/2022 5:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-)

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