room with view


You've outgrown this dim room of mould
  ceiling's peeling, walls are cracked and cold
     get a room with view and broom
        table for chats via zoom
            live without control, equally bold —
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 9:39 PM
so cool!!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 10:36 AM
I enjoyed reading. Have a wonderful day writing away............
Rodgers Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 7:03 AM
Dear Ghairo, I like that it’s funny without being cute, and underneath it there’s that push toward living on your own terms. It's like someone deciding they’re done shrinking themselves to fit a space that never changed. Wonderful Read, Blessings, Daniel
Daniels Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 7:54 AM
Really Daniel ! Give you your dues.. you are just too perceptive for a masculine. Lol.😊
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