Room for Improvement
Room for improvement awaits me indeed
ready to change, from ignorance, be freed
yet... why is the door closed still?
oh, I first ought to pay bill...
fighting slothfulness*-creed midst God's grace-breed.
*Proverbs 19:15 “Slothfulness casteth into a deep sleep; and an idle soul shall suffer hunger.
August 12, 2026
8th place, "Get a Room" Limerick Poetry Premiere Contest
Sponsored by Margarita Lillico; judged on 8/13/2026
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