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I rub, caress, knead your aching muscles. your feet, magnificent, I kiss the arch, along I march, to your calf. Travel up your silky thigh-way I found enlightenment along this path... Jared Pickett 12/31/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 1/19/2010 1:44:00 AM
Hi Jared. This 2-part poem is sensuous and very tastefully written. Great job! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/8/2010 12:05:00 PM
Man these 2 poems are great...Enjoyed reading... Marty
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Date: 12/31/2009 5:02:00 PM
hot one here!!
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Date: 12/31/2009 4:47:00 PM
This is a seducing path indeed..passionate--Happy New Year Jared--Charma
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Date: 12/31/2009 2:49:00 PM
Nice work, the path to enlightenment...Raul
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Date: 12/31/2009 11:46:00 AM
Passionate write.Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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