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I reduced the length of a word this morning  31st august 2016t better suit the genre  

Written large & form erroding Shore & folly show.' Blending light & water almost solid. © Joe Maverick 5-12-2010 for SKATS sandcastle haiku contest

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Date: 5/19/2012 10:29:00 PM
I'm burning the midnight oil with this one, Joe. "rook" be the castle and erosion the swindler? I can see the light on water reflection."almost solid". A short write, but took me on a thought spree!! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 12/31/2011 4:07:00 PM
Viewing this oldie. It's quite different from most sandcastle haiku. I think symbolic! thanks for all the commenting you did to my poetry this year. You are the greatest, Joe. happy New Year.
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Date: 5/8/2011 11:59:00 AM
Nice use of imagery in this poem. Congratulations on your contest win. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 4/17/2011 5:12:00 AM
You have style I'll give you that and thank you for the kind comments on the poetry site, God bless and it was a very good poem by the way, keep up the excellent wok, I'm just to long winded. but I'll get their.
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:30:00 AM
This brings me back to the beaches when I was younger Joe. Happy memories indeed....:)
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Date: 1/3/2011 4:54:00 PM
Reminds me iof being a kid by the shore. Fine haiku. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/3/2011 2:01:00 PM
A terrific haiku Joe.Thanks for your very nice comment.Teresa
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Date: 12/28/2010 5:40:00 PM
Gives the reader something to ponder. Congratulations on your contest win. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 12/22/2010 6:47:00 PM
Oh! yes congratulations on your win,, I LOVE it,,, sweet entry,, rough but cool,..p.d.
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Date: 12/7/2010 9:03:00 PM
congrats on your win, Joe! Very interesting haiku :) --nikko :)
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Date: 12/7/2010 3:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2010 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations, Joe. nice and sweet.. and i can't wait to read your Air Ballooooon ride for Skitty Skat/// love it,..p.d.
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Date: 12/7/2010 11:19:00 AM
Such a compelling view of the "sandcastle," Joe. Congratulations on your win! Just checked my Soup mail and sent you a reply. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/7/2010 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joe in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:47:00 PM
congratulations, Joe. I enjoyed reading this one! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/6/2010 7:49:00 PM
how enticing, joe.. congrats on your win and thanks for your cheers on mine... hope you can drop by to comment on my limerick.. i like getting feedback from you! warmest, nette
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Date: 12/6/2010 3:25:00 PM
Way to go Joe .. congrats on your big win in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry luv.. enjoy your top spot tonight with luv..
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:40:00 PM
Hello Joe, Just the most wonderful Haiku I have read in a long while. Congratulations on your win it is so well done. Thank you for looking in on me As Always, Shar
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Date: 12/6/2010 10:55:00 AM
Congrats Joe on winning the 3rd place-kashinath
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:44:00 AM
Hi. Congrats for the win with the lovely and well written piece above. Thanks for your kind comment. Eamon
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Date: 12/6/2010 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations Joe on your 3ard place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/6/2010 4:23:00 AM
Congrats Joe on a well deserved win!!!
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Date: 12/6/2010 2:10:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Joe
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Date: 12/5/2010 11:21:00 PM
enjoyed this theme Joe, congrats, Harry
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Date: 12/5/2010 9:26:00 PM
Joe~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
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