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Rooftop Woman

atop dust-covered clapboard
hanging sheets washed virgin white
wind-borne absolution encircled
she sang life's aria

distant sailor smiled


Written: 26 December 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Maverick Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Enjoyed this Beto..' Btw congratulations on your Name, it's even easy; to remember You have most points covered.'
Robinson Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 9:09 AM
Delicious poem - I hunger for more! - Thank You - Kindest Wishes - Merlynda
George   Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 7:52 AM
Such a vivid picture you have painted with your magical words, dear Beto. ~ Elaine.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 28, 2020 at 5:47 PM
Wonderful scene you paint!
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