Connie Marcum Wong Poet Free verse

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Romantic Waters

Romantic Waters

Romance dwells in moving waters
Cerulean lake lapping the shore...
Moonlight cast across the waves
As the sea sings of passion's amour.

Kayaking on the Russian river
In twilight's softest silhouette...
Feeling the droplets from Niagara
Lovers kiss near romantic falls.

Skinny dipping in an aqua lagoon
To cool before a night of passion.
Lazing next in hot spring waters
Encompassed in aurora's lights.

Lotus blossoms bask in waters
Of loving mem'ries so sublime.
Romance dwells in moving waters
In love straight from Nature's heart.

5-19-2017

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Susan Ashley October 27, 2017 at 9:48 PM Connie, your poem is water colored in lush and luscious sentiments and imagery and is a pure romantic pleasure to read.. beautifully written and enjoyed! Connie Marcum Wong October 28, 2017 at 6:12 PM Water...the elixir of life. Thank you very much for your lovely comment Susan. It is much appreciated. : )

Lynn Marie September 21, 2017 at 9:51 PM Thinking of you Connie. xoxo sending love, hugs and healing energy. lynn

Lynn Marie September 21, 2017 at 6:09 PM A stunning write Connie. I shudder to think of a world without water, it is as essential to my spiritual well-being as it is a necessity to life. Your words feel like I am meditating before a glorious painting. The imagery and feel is deeply sublime. A lovely poem with beautiful romance to be re-read whenever in need of a serene nature filled moment of bliss. Magnificent writing, a fave Connie Marcum Wong September 21, 2017 at 9:21 PM Your comments really cheer me Lynn. I am dealing with health issues and have not been around much. Thank you so much for the fave. Blessings, Connie : )

Daniel Turner June 12, 2017 at 9:02 AM How romantic this poem is, Mrs Connie. I pray you are on the mend. How wonderful it will be when you are able to get on with life, problem free. By the way, It's been a while since I've been skinny dipping but I haven't forgotten the fun and excitement:) Connie Marcum Wong June 12, 2017 at 6:05 PM Thank you Daniel. Today is the first day I have been up and out of bed. Of course I am cleaning house. It is much needed. I appreciate your good wishes. Thank you very much my friend. ; )

Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2017 at 6:02 AM I will save this as fave! A romance so beautiful, Connie! Connie Marcum Wong June 5, 2017 at 2:29 PM What would our earth feel like with no water? I can't even fathom it. I am so happy you like this enough to fave Kim. Thank you so much. You made my day! xxxooo : )

Vladislav Raven June 3, 2017 at 10:57 AM Hi Connie, such a beautiful write from your pen. The scenes are so beautiful. I always feel such tranquility when i am near the water. Your words did sing in my mind and touch the heart. Excellent poetry as always Connie. Your words are singing. Hugs....Mike. XX This has to be a fave.

Scott Thirtyseven June 2, 2017 at 8:17 AM Beautiful images, nice sensual touches. Great poem.

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2017 at 9:45 PM Oh, good thing I came and saw this note you left me. I will try to remember to send you his picture, Connie!! sorry about your throat. Connie Marcum Wong May 25, 2017 at 9:54 PM Thank you Andrea. Hope you are having a great day! : )

Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2017 at 6:06 PM Just came to say hi, Connie. Looks like Joe will be late tonight, so I will be able to walk Snickers. I can send his picture to you in email. I do not know why Soup won't let my picture stay in place when I post it from my email. Connie Marcum Wong May 24, 2017 at 7:18 PM I can't post pictures from my pictures on my computer either. I get the link from photos online to share, but it just won't post mine. Send me the pic of Snickers. I still have this horrible soar throat and so does Mike. I will see my doctor again tomorrow. : )

Paul Callus May 23, 2017 at 3:57 PM A flowing display of passion and romance, Connie. Water can be so very inspiring, and this poem is proof of that. Full marks to a beautiful poem that leaves its mark on the reader. #7 Regards // paul Connie Marcum Wong May 24, 2017 at 3:48 AM Thank you Paul. I love being near the water, and to see moonlight or sunlight and lights on the water is so romantic. : )

Arthur Vaso May 21, 2017 at 10:00 PM I am drowning in the beauty of such lovely poetry! Loved this one Connie! Connie Marcum Wong May 22, 2017 at 3:50 AM Thank you very much Arthur. ; )

Andrea Dietrich May 21, 2017 at 7:34 PM wow, you captured so much romance in the waters!!! From lake to river to lagoon, you are a marvel, Connie! Connie Marcum Wong May 22, 2017 at 3:53 AM Thank you Andrea. My daughter Jennifer e r inspired this one when she shared her kayaking experience on the Russion river. ; )

Eve Roper May 21, 2017 at 2:11 PM Enjoyed your lovely flowing romantic scenery of flowing waters. ~* Connie Marcum Wong May 21, 2017 at 6:30 PM Thank you very much Eve. ; )

Lisa Ricci May 20, 2017 at 1:52 PM Hello Connie. With a title such as this you don't have to twist my arm to turn the page. You did not disappoint. My goodness Connie this is poetry at its finest. I am speaking solely of your words language and your placements thereof. Honestly. Be proud. Well done in its entirety. Have a wonderful night. Connie Marcum Wong May 21, 2017 at 6:31 PM Thank you for being so supportive of my work Lisa. I really appreciate it. ; )

Richard Lamoureux May 20, 2017 at 9:46 AM I enjoyed drinking in this passionate piece! Connie Marcum Wong May 20, 2017 at 9:56 AM Oh thank you Richard. I am up too early and about to try to go back to sleep. First I will visit your page. : )

Anne-Marie Coreggia May 20, 2017 at 9:18 AM Connie, your poem's romantic waves lift the heart . . . and what gorgeous images you picked! 7 :) Amitiés Connie Marcum Wong May 20, 2017 at 9:39 AM Thank you Anne-Marie. Even the rain here in Hawaii is romantic. It is warm and refreshing. ; )

Darren White May 20, 2017 at 8:52 AM So beautiful and romantic, like one of the beautiful pictures you included :) Kissing near a waterfall...sigh... :) 7

Elizabeth Kinch May 19, 2017 at 9:33 PM Romance and beauty in each verse, wonderful Connie. Connie Marcum Wong May 20, 2017 at 9:40 AM Thank you Elizabeth. : )

Lin Lane May 19, 2017 at 8:28 PM Each verse is more beautiful than the one before it. Your words are as romantic as the pictures you've posted, Connie. A great package. Connie Marcum Wong May 20, 2017 at 3:38 AM Thank you so much Lin. I could build a poem from each but sometimes less is more. I like to use my imagination. I appreciate your support Lin. Cheers ; )

Jan Allison May 19, 2017 at 7:08 PM Wow those tranquil waters cascade into a waterfall of unbridled passion - beautiful and seductive imagery Connie:-) hugs jan xx Connie Marcum Wong May 19, 2017 at 9:22 PM Thank you very much Jan. : )

Jean Murray May 19, 2017 at 5:10 PM I have felt the droplets at Niagra Connie, alone unfortunately. This is so sensual I'm lonely now. Just lovely. Connie Marcum Wong May 19, 2017 at 5:25 PM I can relate. It is sad to visit somewhere so romantic and share it with strangers. Thank you Jean. I would go visit he falls again in a nano second. ; :

Old Man Emu May 19, 2017 at 3:51 PM Fantastic poem Connie, really enjoyed it! Took us around the world in pools of water. Well done. Kind regards, Craig Connie Marcum Wong May 19, 2017 at 5:10 PM Thank you Craig. I always think of places near the water when I think of romance. ; )

Laura Leiser May 19, 2017 at 2:26 PM Wow, Connie! This is an amazing poem filled with tranquil serenity and romance, too! I loved this pretty piece of yours!! 7++ :) Connie Marcum Wong May 19, 2017 at 2:47 PM Thank you Laura. My daughter inspired this poem by telling me of how she and her friend went kayaking at twilight down the Russian river in northern California near where she lives.: )

Chris Green May 19, 2017 at 1:47 PM Wow, now who's the romantic here...this was beautiful, sensual, alluring and so very romantic Connie. Each of these scenes you have created took my breath away. What a wonderful poem to read on a long Friday afternoon. Connie Marcum Wong May 19, 2017 at 2:06 PM Thank you very much Chris. It is barely 9am here and I am enjoying poetry and tea! ; )