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Romantic, Romantic

R  oses, ruby red you always brought with you
O  h, my darling, I love you so much it hurts my heart
M  y whispers tell you so over and over
A  nd time and space does not diminish how I adore you
N  ow, sit my darling and we will dine, and
T  ip our wine glasses to love eternal
I  n the flickering candles we speak so softly
C  an we skip the final course, my love

R  uby lips need your kisses
O  h, come my love, follow me and, lets
M  ake this night last long, oh kiss me my love
A  nd hold me all the night in your arms, and
N  othing can take you from me until the morning
T  wo  swirling in the moonlight as one . . . because
I  inside this dream we are one forever, evermore, oh
C  an it be true my love, that you are but a name engraved. 

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February 17, 2018

Poetry/Acrostic/Romantic, Romantic
Copyright  Protected, ID 18-9952-51-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.



Written for the contest,  Romantic Acrostic 
sponsor, John Hamilton

Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 5:31 AM
wow you did a double acrostic Constance, the second one was so sad, many congratulations on you win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Jan, thank you for visiting my poem and the congrats ~
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 11:48 AM
The second poem echoes the other. This was very clever on top of being very romantic!! Sorry it took me so long to see it. Congrats, sweet Constance.
La France Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Andrea, thank you for that nice comment ~
Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 2:23 PM
The last lines gave me shivers. What an amazing poem, BW. A definite FAVE for me.
La France Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:09 AM
Line, thank you for the amazing and the fave ~
Hamilton Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 1:48 PM
So nicely done Constance, congrats on a nice placement!
La France Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:09 AM
John, thank you for the contest and my placement ~
Pandit Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 7:33 PM
Double the pleasure with your lovely set of romantic poems..well written, BW..best for a win!
La France Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Vijay, thank you for the lovely and compliment ~
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