Romantic Charm In Four Lines - This One Worked

Hey baby there's a roast in the oven
And all the dishes are done
I washed your socks and underwear
Now let's have some fun







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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 7:21 PM
oh you should have entered this one. It's pure delight!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Lol! I figured it was exactly what he wasn't looking for ;p
Canerdy Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 5:05 PM
So clever and cute, Maureen! Janice
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Thank you Janice! :)) xomo!
One Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 12:37 PM
You didnt enter? Why not?
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Romancing the cheese ;) delighted you read it! Thought I'd leave room for true romantic contenders. Happy VD my friend <3
DiMino Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 8:47 AM
With such a playful offer, dessert preceding the roast, forgotten then the dryer, likewise, dinner was toast.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Lol! And the dog get's the crispy roast ;P
Cunningham Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 10:46 PM
Wow, another gem, I think there is going to be lots of these 4 liners sharing top spot. Good luck Maureen. Regards Tom
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:51 AM
Thank you Tom! Didn't enter this one, not the cheese whiz he's looking for ;P xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 9:55 PM
You are so right, it works every time. Bravo, Maureen. Cute poem.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Tee hee yup! Thank you Line :) xomo!
Michael Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Not wasting any time...are you...that is down to earth love...All the best Maureen
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Giggles, yup! Thank you dear xomo!
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:59 PM
Now that would work if it came from a MAN saying it to ME (but I do this stuff for hubbie all the time. haha) VEry cute one, Maureen. Hope it was your hubbie saying it to YOU
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Lol I know eh?! No that was me saying to him... I'm awful for not doing dishes ;) xomo!
Talbot Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:14 PM
Another winner, he's going to be spoilt for choice, I'm sure... Mick
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Tee hee ;) I didn't enter this one, it's not what he's looking for. Thank you though! xomo
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