Jan Allison Poet Alliteration

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Romantic 4 Lines

Olive wore a wedding dress of lilac voile

Her groom gave a beaming smile
When she glided down the aisle

Peter persistently proposed… Peter’s patience prevailed!

Contest: 4 lines

First line: anagram.
Second/third line: Couplet
Fourth line: Alliteration.  

Sponsor Silent one
18th December 2015

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Cherie Fleming January 30, 2018 at 11:35 PM Love this!! Jan Allison January 31, 2018 at 3:58 AM Thanks Cherie I love using alliteration as a poetic device:-) hugs jan xx

Parray Shahid December 26, 2015 at 6:59 AM Nice with Alliteration. Jan Allison December 26, 2015 at 7:00 AM Thanks Parray I like the 3 different styles we have to combine for the contest challenge:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso December 24, 2015 at 6:01 PM So beautiful, I love the photo to joined to the poem! Congrats on Win! Jan Allison December 24, 2015 at 6:13 PM Thanks Arthur I agree the dress is so lovely and perfect to go with the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 22, 2015 at 2:12 AM Brilliant take Jan n a great win.. big congrats! Jan Allison December 22, 2015 at 2:13 AM Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry December 21, 2015 at 7:57 AM So cute! Congratulations! Jan Allison December 21, 2015 at 8:24 AM Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus December 21, 2015 at 7:54 AM Had no doubt this would fly high, Jan! Congratulations!! Hugs *** paul Jan Allison December 21, 2015 at 8:23 AM Thanks Paul:-) Hugs jan xx

Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 7:10 AM Excellent win Jan!! Jan Allison December 21, 2015 at 7:12 AM Thanks you so much for all your support Michael I really do appreciate your kindness:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight December 20, 2015 at 8:17 PM I agree with Andrea, Jan. Well done, and it does read like a little story in so few words. Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison December 21, 2015 at 4:14 AM Thanks Sandra for all the help and support you have given me on my poetry journey:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2015 at 7:36 PM I really enjoyed the little story this one wove, Jan. BIG congrats for your win. btw, I was trying to discover which contest I lost my triolet in (you asked me about it tonight) but now I can't find the N/A and which contest it was for. Probably that one guy years ago who never placed me! Jan Allison December 21, 2015 at 4:13 AM Thanks Andrea :-) hugs jan xx we all know about N/A in contests lol:-) hugs jan xx

Balveen Cheema December 20, 2015 at 6:10 PM Its become sweeter with the visual delight! Congrats and Merry X'mas to you and your family! Jan Allison December 20, 2015 at 6:12 PM Thanks Balveen I have found out my son is coming home for a few days from university - am a happy mummy lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2015 at 4:52 PM jan, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ Jan Allison December 20, 2015 at 4:53 PM Thanks Linda:-) hugs jan xx

CayCay Godwin December 20, 2015 at 2:09 PM Good job of it! I am impressed and have writing one for this contest on my to-do list which I keep nowhere. His contests can go quite fast. I bet you enjoyed the form challenge - again, you done good, girl ... CayCay Jan Allison December 20, 2015 at 2:10 PM Thanks CayCay I enjoyed this one:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper December 20, 2015 at 11:52 AM I love this, Jan, this was a very difficult form to do. Congratulations on your win! Jan Allison December 20, 2015 at 1:40 PM Thanks Eve I do appreciate your friendship and support:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 11:41 AM JAN, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :) Jan Allison December 20, 2015 at 1:39 PM Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie December 19, 2015 at 12:29 PM incorporating styles running wild as the smile of a child who was never shown denial nor ever defiled the whole while journeying that lonely mile to be Judged At The Final Trial....;) Jan Allison December 19, 2015 at 12:31 PM Has anyone ever told you you would make an excellent poet Eric lol - Seriously I do love your comments:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus December 18, 2015 at 5:14 PM All 4 lines are lovely, sweet and romantic. I love it! Hugs // paul Jan Allison December 18, 2015 at 5:17 PM Thanks Paul I would love to see Olive walk down the aisle in lilac voile:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2015 at 3:58 PM you did a GREAT job, Jan. Love that color lilac and this cute poem. Jan Allison December 18, 2015 at 4:07 PM Thanks Andrea I really appreciate your support:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2015 at 12:33 PM - Yeah, beautiful (I want one lilac wedding dress ....... next time I get married :))) - Luck in contest, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison December 18, 2015 at 12:44 PM Thanks Anne Lise:-) the dress in the picture is very pretty:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud December 18, 2015 at 11:21 AM right on the weddding dot, jan... i like this a lot!...huggs! Jan Allison December 18, 2015 at 12:43 PM Thank you Nette I do appreciate your support:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis December 18, 2015 at 7:09 AM Masterpiece of form and content, dear Jan! A seven and good luck! Jan Allison December 18, 2015 at 7:37 AM Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian December 17, 2015 at 9:32 PM Perfect!!!! You're going to do very well.....hugs Jan Allison December 18, 2015 at 4:47 AM Thanks Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx