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Romantic 4 Lines

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Olive wore a wedding dress of lilac voile Her groom gave a beaming smile When she glided down the aisle Peter persistently proposed… Peter’s patience prevailed! Contest: 4 lines First line: anagram. Second/third line: Couplet Fourth line: Alliteration. Sponsor Silent one 18th December 2015

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Cherie Fleming

Date: 1/30/2018 11:35:00 PM

Love this!!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/31/2018 3:58:00 AM

Thanks Cherie I love using alliteration as a poetic device:-) hugs jan xx

Parray Shahid

Date: 12/26/2015 6:59:00 AM

Nice with Alliteration.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2015 7:00:00 AM

Thanks Parray I like the 3 different styles we have to combine for the contest challenge:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/24/2015 6:01:00 PM

So beautiful, I love the photo to joined to the poem! Congrats on Win!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/24/2015 6:13:00 PM

Thanks Arthur I agree the dress is so lovely and perfect to go with the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/22/2015 2:12:00 AM

Brilliant take Jan n a great win.. big congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2015 2:13:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/21/2015 7:57:00 AM

So cute! Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2015 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/21/2015 7:54:00 AM

Had no doubt this would fly high, Jan! Congratulations!! Hugs *** paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2015 8:23:00 AM

Thanks Paul:-) Hugs jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 12/21/2015 7:10:00 AM

Excellent win Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2015 7:12:00 AM

Thanks you so much for all your support Michael I really do appreciate your kindness:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/20/2015 8:17:00 PM

I agree with Andrea, Jan. Well done, and it does read like a little story in so few words. Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2015 4:14:00 AM

Thanks Sandra for all the help and support you have given me on my poetry journey:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2015 7:36:00 PM

I really enjoyed the little story this one wove, Jan. BIG congrats for your win. btw, I was trying to discover which contest I lost my triolet in (you asked me about it tonight) but now I can't find the N/A and which contest it was for. Probably that one guy years ago who never placed me!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/21/2015 4:13:00 AM

Thanks Andrea :-) hugs jan xx we all know about N/A in contests lol:-) hugs jan xx

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/20/2015 6:10:00 PM

Its become sweeter with the visual delight! Congrats and Merry X'mas to you and your family!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/20/2015 6:12:00 PM

Thanks Balveen I have found out my son is coming home for a few days from university - am a happy mummy lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2015 4:52:00 PM

jan, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 12/20/2015 4:53:00 PM

Thanks Linda:-) hugs jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/20/2015 2:09:00 PM

Good job of it! I am impressed and have writing one for this contest on my to-do list which I keep nowhere. His contests can go quite fast. I bet you enjoyed the form challenge - again, you done good, girl ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 12/20/2015 2:10:00 PM

Thanks CayCay I enjoyed this one:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/20/2015 11:52:00 AM

I love this, Jan, this was a very difficult form to do. Congratulations on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/20/2015 1:40:00 PM

Thanks Eve I do appreciate your friendship and support:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 11:41:00 AM

JAN, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/20/2015 1:39:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 12/19/2015 12:29:00 PM

incorporating styles running wild as the smile of a child who was never shown denial nor ever defiled the whole while journeying that lonely mile to be Judged At The Final Trial....;)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/19/2015 12:31:00 PM

Has anyone ever told you you would make an excellent poet Eric lol - Seriously I do love your comments:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/18/2015 5:14:00 PM

All 4 lines are lovely, sweet and romantic. I love it! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2015 5:17:00 PM

Thanks Paul I would love to see Olive walk down the aisle in lilac voile:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2015 3:58:00 PM

you did a GREAT job, Jan. Love that color lilac and this cute poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/18/2015 4:07:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I really appreciate your support:-) hugs jan xx