Romantic

Sensuous as a kiss, gift of romantic dreams, Your essence I feel as you tiptoe stealthily Alluring sensibilities, revealing amorously Silken ruby lips sparkling on work of beauty Embellishing tiny dimples upon rosy cheeks; Oh! the mystical you, loving you is euphoric. Unannounced you titillate my life’s revelry Mellifluous alike spring’s giggling streams Occupying me happily on perilous journey Lending your hand when I am trekking hills, Jubilant visage of my life’s pristine prairies~ An enchanting emissary of proffers amatory. When I asked a favor from a lonesome night~ Despondent, starless gloom of moonless skies Clamoring earnestly to speed-forward time So, bearing Venus high, the dawn could arrive; There you stood fondly, donning flirty smile Mesmerizing amiably in hypnotic hazel eyes. Ah! what a bliss it is, in your endearing glee When moments of joy life’s upheavals steal, My darling I so adore you~ real as imagined For you never fail to answer my every plea, Questing realm of ecstasy elated you spree Amid riveting reveries thrilling my fantasies. October 6, 2021 Placed 1st: “R” Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Theme chosen: Romantic

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Valsa George

Date: 11/20/2021 7:47:00 AM

'Occupying me happily on perilous journey Lending your hand when I am trekking hills,' ---- beautiful and meaningful lines. This is what is expected of a partner in life. With your pen you create magic just like a magician with his wand. Simply awesome, dear friend !

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/21/2021 12:16:00 PM

Vijay, congratulations on your win! This is delicate "bliss" - romantic, sensual. The word cherish keeps coming to mind as your lines weave their spell of romance and commitment through each line. Tender and lovely Vijay!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/17/2021 3:22:00 AM

You have accomplished 'romantic' and beyond, Vijay! Your skilled pen never lets you down, my friend. Regards // paul

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/13/2021 12:03:00 PM

Beautiful, decriptive piece about dreams of love and romance that come true. Janice

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/12/2021 6:49:00 PM

Very beautiful and romantic Vijay :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/10/2021 11:04:00 PM

Awesomely romantic, Vijay:) congratulations:)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/9/2021 2:13:00 PM

A lovely romantic piece Vijay with great imagery and nice rhyme too. Take care, Gordon

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/10/2021 11:12:00 AM

Thanks for visiting Gordon. Much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2021 9:54:00 AM

SO romantic, Vijay. Big congrats to you for your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/10/2021 11:12:00 AM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/8/2021 8:20:00 AM

The fantasy fulfilled so beautifully and so full of romance is so wonderfully crafted in this poem of love Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/10/2021 11:11:00 AM

Much appreciate Mike--many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/8/2021 12:30:00 AM

Aw... what a romantic write Vijayji... "mellifluous alike spring's giggling streams"... loved this line... and what a beautiful imagination... in the stanza that begins... " when I asked a favor....".. Congrats on your win in the contest with this excellent poem... God bless... ~ Ani

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2021 4:23:00 AM

Thank you taking the time to provide detailed feedback, Ani. Much appreciate your visit kind remarks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/7/2021 6:35:00 PM

Excellent winner here Vijay, the poetry is superb.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2021 4:22:00 AM

Many thanks for your visit and comments Harry--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/7/2021 6:00:00 PM

This is quite lovely Vijay. Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2021 4:22:00 AM

Glad to see you back, Connie. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/7/2021 5:16:00 PM

Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win, my friend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2021 4:21:00 AM

Thank you for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/7/2021 2:17:00 PM

Back with congratulations on a well-deserved win, Vijay. Kindest regards

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2021 4:20:00 AM

Thank you for your return visit, Lasaad. Regards.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2021 1:52:00 PM

what a lovely romantic tribute Vijay, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2021 4:20:00 AM

So glad you stopped by with your kind remarks, Jan. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/7/2021 10:02:00 AM

Oh my gosh!! What a special win!! Congratulations Vijay. You write superb poetry. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2021 4:19:00 AM

Much appreciate, as always, Heidi. Many thanks.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/7/2021 9:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely/creative~~~story/write. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2021 4:19:00 AM

Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Constance La France

Date: 10/7/2021 7:57:00 AM

Vijay, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this beautiful poem, so well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/8/2021 4:18:00 AM

Much appreciate your kind remarks, Constance. Many thanks for hosting contests and taking the time to write feedback.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 10/6/2021 11:15:00 PM

Amazing imagery!!! What a bliss it is, in your enthralling romantic verses! This reminds me of a telugu song, where the hero envisages a mystical girl (appears only in his dream) who helps him do adventures

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2021 3:56:00 AM

Sometimes those dreams are more appealing than real life. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Supraja. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/6/2021 10:53:00 PM

Fantastic romantic poetry. A masterpiece of love Best for a win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2021 3:54:00 AM

A treat to receive your complimentary feedback, Victor. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/6/2021 7:37:00 PM

"Silken ruby lips sparkling on work of beauty" She sounds simply breathtaking. This is so beautiful and *romantic*. May your fantasies continue to leave you breathless. Just remember, in dreams, anything is possible. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2021 3:53:00 AM

So true--dreams and fantasies elevate the imagination. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always, my friend. Many thanks, Brandy.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2021 6:07:00 PM

Wow! Vijay, You took the word "romantic" and penned a masterpiece. I enjoyed every word and line. You are such a gifted writer, and I'm so happy I get to partake of your incredible gift. Real or fantasy I found this write to be very romantic. Congrats in advance.;-)Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/7/2021 3:51:00 AM

I am delighted to start my day today with your kind feedback. Much appreciate your vote of confidence my friend. Many thanks for the compliments, Alexis.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/6/2021 2:42:00 PM

Devoted to your wife, Vijay, is a stunning romantic poem. The pledge of passion is fulfilled in every aspect; you are blessed to be with someone who thrills you to such an amazing extent. Thank you and best of luck in the contest

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2021 2:51:00 PM

Not quite, Lasaad. This is about the one that shows up in fantasy. Much appreciate your feedback. Many thanks.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/6/2021 2:24:00 PM

This fulfills the promise of romance in every way, you are lucky to have someone who thrills you so much! Best wishes for the contest~

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2021 2:47:00 PM

It's about the mystical one that thrills--only true in gift of romantic dreams. We have all experienced those from time to time. Much appreciate Michelle. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/6/2021 1:39:00 PM

A beautiful romantic verse dedicated to your wife Vijay. You are a true romantic poet. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/6/2021 2:49:00 PM

Romantic verse for sure but not about my wife. This one is dedicated to fantasy. Much appreciate Tom. Many thanks.