Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Romantic

Sensuous as a kiss, gift of romantic dreams, 
Your essence I feel as you tiptoe stealthily
Alluring sensibilities, revealing amorously
Silken ruby lips sparkling on work of beauty
Embellishing tiny dimples upon rosy cheeks;
Oh! the mystical you, loving you is euphoric.

Unannounced you titillate my life’s revelry
Mellifluous alike spring’s giggling streams
Occupying me happily on perilous journey
Lending your hand when I am trekking hills,
Jubilant visage of my life’s pristine prairies~
An enchanting emissary of proffers amatory.

When I asked a favor from a lonesome night~
Despondent, starless gloom of moonless skies
Clamoring earnestly to speed-forward time
So, bearing Venus high, the dawn could arrive;
There you stood fondly, donning flirty smile
Mesmerizing amiably in hypnotic hazel eyes.

Ah! what a bliss it is, in your endearing glee
When moments of joy life’s upheavals steal,
My darling I so adore you~ real as imagined
For you never fail to answer my every plea,
Questing realm of ecstasy elated you spree
Amid riveting reveries thrilling my fantasies.

October 6, 2021
Placed 1st: “R” Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Theme chosen: Romantic

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Valsa George November 20, 2021 at 7:47 AM 'Occupying me happily on perilous journey Lending your hand when I am trekking hills,' ---- beautiful and meaningful lines. This is what is expected of a partner in life. With your pen you create magic just like a magician with his wand. Simply awesome, dear friend !

Sam Kauffman October 21, 2021 at 12:16 PM Vijay, congratulations on your win! This is delicate "bliss" - romantic, sensual. The word cherish keeps coming to mind as your lines weave their spell of romance and commitment through each line. Tender and lovely Vijay!

Paul Callus October 17, 2021 at 3:22 AM You have accomplished 'romantic' and beyond, Vijay! Your skilled pen never lets you down, my friend. Regards // paul

Janice Canerdy October 13, 2021 at 12:03 PM Beautiful, decriptive piece about dreams of love and romance that come true. Janice

Angela Crabtree October 12, 2021 at 6:49 PM Very beautiful and romantic Vijay :)

Joanna Daniel October 10, 2021 at 11:04 PM Awesomely romantic, Vijay:) congratulations:)

Gordon Mcconnell October 9, 2021 at 2:13 PM A lovely romantic piece Vijay with great imagery and nice rhyme too. Take care, Gordon Vijay Pandit October 10, 2021 at 11:12 AM Thanks for visiting Gordon. Much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2021 at 9:54 AM SO romantic, Vijay. Big congrats to you for your win. Vijay Pandit October 10, 2021 at 11:12 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Mike Gentile October 8, 2021 at 8:20 AM The fantasy fulfilled so beautifully and so full of romance is so wonderfully crafted in this poem of love Vijay! Vijay Pandit October 10, 2021 at 11:11 AM Much appreciate Mike--many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar October 8, 2021 at 12:30 AM Aw... what a romantic write Vijayji... "mellifluous alike spring's giggling streams"... loved this line... and what a beautiful imagination... in the stanza that begins... " when I asked a favor....".. Congrats on your win in the contest with this excellent poem... God bless... ~ Ani Vijay Pandit October 8, 2021 at 4:23 AM Thank you taking the time to provide detailed feedback, Ani. Much appreciate your visit kind remarks.

Harry Horsman October 7, 2021 at 6:35 PM Excellent winner here Vijay, the poetry is superb. Vijay Pandit October 8, 2021 at 4:22 AM Many thanks for your visit and comments Harry--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong October 7, 2021 at 6:00 PM This is quite lovely Vijay. Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit October 8, 2021 at 4:22 AM Glad to see you back, Connie. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Alexis Y. October 7, 2021 at 5:16 PM Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win, my friend:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit October 8, 2021 at 4:21 AM Thank you for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate.

Sotto Poet October 7, 2021 at 2:17 PM Back with congratulations on a well-deserved win, Vijay. Kindest regards Vijay Pandit October 8, 2021 at 4:20 AM Thank you for your return visit, Lasaad. Regards.

Jan Allison October 7, 2021 at 1:52 PM what a lovely romantic tribute Vijay, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Vijay Pandit October 8, 2021 at 4:20 AM So glad you stopped by with your kind remarks, Jan. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Heidi Sands October 7, 2021 at 10:02 AM Oh my gosh!! What a special win!! Congratulations Vijay. You write superb poetry. :) Vijay Pandit October 8, 2021 at 4:19 AM Much appreciate, as always, Heidi. Many thanks.

Paula Goldsmith October 7, 2021 at 9:14 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely/creative~~~story/write. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a blessed day with your win............... Vijay Pandit October 8, 2021 at 4:19 AM Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Constance La France October 7, 2021 at 7:57 AM Vijay, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this beautiful poem, so well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Vijay Pandit October 8, 2021 at 4:18 AM Much appreciate your kind remarks, Constance. Many thanks for hosting contests and taking the time to write feedback.

Supraja Kannan October 6, 2021 at 11:15 PM Amazing imagery!!! What a bliss it is, in your enthralling romantic verses! This reminds me of a telugu song, where the hero envisages a mystical girl (appears only in his dream) who helps him do adventures Vijay Pandit October 7, 2021 at 3:56 AM Sometimes those dreams are more appealing than real life. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Supraja. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar October 6, 2021 at 10:53 PM Fantastic romantic poetry. A masterpiece of love Best for a win. Vijay Pandit October 7, 2021 at 3:54 AM A treat to receive your complimentary feedback, Victor. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole October 6, 2021 at 7:37 PM "Silken ruby lips sparkling on work of beauty" She sounds simply breathtaking. This is so beautiful and *romantic*. May your fantasies continue to leave you breathless. Just remember, in dreams, anything is possible. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit October 7, 2021 at 3:53 AM So true--dreams and fantasies elevate the imagination. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always, my friend. Many thanks, Brandy.

Alexis Y. October 6, 2021 at 6:07 PM Wow! Vijay, You took the word "romantic" and penned a masterpiece. I enjoyed every word and line. You are such a gifted writer, and I'm so happy I get to partake of your incredible gift. Real or fantasy I found this write to be very romantic. Congrats in advance.;-)Alexis Vijay Pandit October 7, 2021 at 3:51 AM I am delighted to start my day today with your kind feedback. Much appreciate your vote of confidence my friend. Many thanks for the compliments, Alexis.

Sotto Poet October 6, 2021 at 2:42 PM Devoted to your wife, Vijay, is a stunning romantic poem. The pledge of passion is fulfilled in every aspect; you are blessed to be with someone who thrills you to such an amazing extent. Thank you and best of luck in the contest Vijay Pandit October 6, 2021 at 2:51 PM Not quite, Lasaad. This is about the one that shows up in fantasy. Much appreciate your feedback. Many thanks.

Michelle Faulkner October 6, 2021 at 2:24 PM This fulfills the promise of romance in every way, you are lucky to have someone who thrills you so much! Best wishes for the contest~ Vijay Pandit October 6, 2021 at 2:47 PM It's about the mystical one that thrills--only true in gift of romantic dreams. We have all experienced those from time to time. Much appreciate Michelle. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham October 6, 2021 at 1:39 PM A beautiful romantic verse dedicated to your wife Vijay. You are a true romantic poet. Tom Vijay Pandit October 6, 2021 at 2:49 PM Romantic verse for sure but not about my wife. This one is dedicated to fantasy. Much appreciate Tom. Many thanks.