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Romantic

quaintest of little restaurants
sweet setting for a bit of romance
lights dimly dimmed
tables set just so
menu absolutely delightful
prices meant not to give a fright

we sat there in the corner
before long heard some kafuffle
from behind in the kitchen
it went on and on
was just relentless
we could hear
every single word
vicious tongue lashing

we figured out in time
this idyllic setting
was just a venus trap
it didn’t take us long
to gather up our things
run out as fast we could



Submitted on October 4, 2021 for "R" CONTEST, NEW OR OLD sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE  -  RANKED 2ND

Originally posted on February 20, 2019

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Date: 10/7/2021 2:15:00 PM
sounds like a place we went to once lol, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2021 10:59:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/7/2021 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "ROMANTIC" is a creative story/write. I loved your ending. Enjoy your win with blessings....................
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Date: 10/7/2021 8:06:00 AM
Line, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this wonderful poem, so well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 10/7/2021 10:59:00 PM
Thanks, Constance. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/21/2019 1:39:00 AM
A scary place; good idea to leave. Well penned.
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Date: 2/21/2019 10:05:00 AM
LOL thanks, ML.
Date: 2/21/2019 12:05:00 AM
It sounds like you knew what to do, and did it unscathed.
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Date: 2/21/2019 10:05:00 AM
Appearances can be deceiving.

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