Romancing You

Your like a rock, hard and steady, I'm soft like a flower against your skin, you hold my heart, I know I hold yours, I feel the beat of it from within. I touch your lips, trace their lines, you hold my eyes, as you trace mine, we've lost all track of time, as love unfolds between us, so divine. What gentle love we have shared, husband and wife, we both have cared, nothing more than heavenly bliss on earth, between us a deeper love is birthed. Who could stop the flow of time, who could stop this surge of mine, of love that came so softly seeded, when I first discovered it was you I needed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/7/2010 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations Sena on your excellent poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/5/2010 2:24:00 PM
Congrats Sena on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv..
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Date: 11/22/2010 6:34:00 PM
What a great dedication to your partner!!;)
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Date: 11/17/2010 9:35:00 PM
Sena, a great write to illustrate the bond between you and your love. Great! Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/16/2010 9:55:00 PM
A deep passionate love burning as coal exists between you two.I could see that reading your poem,Seena.
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:54:00 PM
How lucky you are to have a man who makes you so happy, Sena. Lonnie is a keeper! Enjoyed this uplifting tribute to your marriage very much. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/16/2010 2:22:00 PM
What a fantastic and wonderful write on romancing you, Sena
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Date: 11/16/2010 1:08:00 PM
I luv love poems. I'm stuck on love loss for some reason. I think it's because I can't find anything funny to write :-(. By the way did you write this to me for me? hehe It has that feel to it and it give me a nice warm feeling. Love you too. Sidney
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Date: 11/15/2010 7:36:00 PM
a sweet and lovely write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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