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Romance Was Not Our Muse

Romance was not our muse, he types Not writes his farewells before each morning - A simple 'Till tomorrow' left by cooling sheets. We started as lovers, before we were friends Speaking in touches instead of thoughts Every night he clouded our secrecy With cigarette smoke, an ashtray beneath my bed, A counter of the days we were spent. But a playful joke turned bittersweet, I slipped My favourite glinting stud, a gift In his pocket lining, finding instead a reminder Of sin and silent lives, a ticket To home and back to reality. In dawn’s light and an empty bed, I wrapped Bruised red lips around his fading cig, enjoying The lingering taste of him and his ashy breath. Romance was not our muse, I type Not write my farewells before the morning - A simple 'Good-bye' left by cooling sheets.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/30/2014 4:24:00 PM
I agree with Richard L, this is a reelly moody poem wel worth a second read. Loo forward to more of your work. God Bless .D.
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Date: 12/29/2014 9:42:00 AM
I love the mood of this piece, congratulations. I wrote one called Slump for the contest, you might enjoy it.
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Date: 12/26/2014 11:00:00 PM
Ashley, congratulations in Craigs C., chopped contest.... LUV LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2014 9:02:00 PM
Wonderful write Ashley! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/22/2014 1:58:00 PM
Wonderful win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/21/2014 10:04:00 PM
Loved this poem, Congratulations on your well deserved win with this excellent write.
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Date: 12/21/2014 4:01:00 PM
So well written...big congrats on your win
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Date: 12/21/2014 3:42:00 PM
beautifully penned - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/21/2014 12:11:00 PM
Congrats Ashley. I liked how this was framed by the first and last stanzas.
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Date: 12/17/2014 11:58:00 AM
Beautiful and welcome to Poetry Soup..
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Date: 12/12/2014 3:50:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL!! Please share more. your writing is very good..~Joel
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