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"When tomorrow comes and I'm again with you, I'll stand on your feet while we dance forever." Quote _ by poet Yesterday seasons waved goodbye as we listened to sounds of joy. Spacious skies ever made anew from sincere blue to jealous green. Crosswise threads wind and hours drew nights penciled footsteps patterns drew faint. A wanderer of aged mirth, glean quintessence love set forever. Underneath sun amorous view sweet golden years, not a goodbye. You and I, unfinished garden of poetic dreams and romance. My love, my being still feels your touch and hear your whispers of love. 3/28/2022 Form L - Lay - New Poetry Contest 2. Romance Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 4/8/2022 1:17:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful and emotional poem and I love your quote also ~Constance

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/8/2022 10:27:00 AM

Eve, congratulations on your win! "You and I, an unfinished garden" - what an amazing line among so many wonderful lines. Beautiful tribute. Sending you blessings my friend!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/5/2022 4:34:00 AM

I have quickly read your winning entry in Constance's contest and found it worthy of its honor. Congrats. Sara

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 4/4/2022 8:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. A beautiful tribute to the one you love. :)Paulette

Ann Peck

Date: 4/4/2022 8:50:00 AM

Your poem is so lovely, Eva, especially,"You and I, unfinished garden" so bittersweet. Congratulations on First!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/4/2022 6:10:00 AM

Very beautiful writing as usual. Congratulations!

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/1/2022 7:17:00 AM

How lofty your expressions are! Breathtakingly beautiful lines from beginning to end.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/31/2022 6:07:00 PM

Bittersweet story, so sweetly penned, Eve. Poignant and moving. Thanks, Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2022 2:13:00 PM

a beautiful unrhymed version, Eve. Very well crafted.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/30/2022 7:28:00 PM

Eve, this is so beautiful and moving! Janice

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/30/2022 1:10:00 PM

Hi Eve, when a couple have been together almost forever, the loss of one or the other is very traumatic. I can only imagine your words in the last couplet, but I'm certain that you see him in your grandchildren. Love and blessings, Jennifer.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/30/2022 1:44:00 AM

A poem on the quintessence of love. Great romance. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/29/2022 2:52:00 PM

Romance that was and one day will be again. A verse from the heart Eve. Hope you're keeping well and good luck in the contest. Tom

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/29/2022 11:33:00 AM

European women love to stand on a man's toes, perhaps because they previously danced with an American? Enjoyed!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/29/2022 10:34:00 AM

Hello Eve, I enjoyed this poem as well. Good luck in the with this poem. Hugs.

Howard Kerr

Date: 3/29/2022 12:30:00 AM

Romance That Was is impeccable, Eve. A most evocative work. Best of luck with it. Congratulations on your Screech Owl win. Thank you so much for your soupmail re my entry Best regards Howard

Eve Roper
Date: 3/29/2022 7:29:00 AM

Thank you, Howard, for your compliment and encouragement. Blessings to you with inspiration

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/28/2022 9:29:00 PM

Ah, so lovely, Eve. I really enjoyed it, and I thought the illustration as perfect. Best of luck in Constance's contest.

Eve Roper
Date: 3/29/2022 7:29:00 AM

Thank you, Milt, for your compliment and encouragement. Blessings to you with inspiration