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Romance Senryu Contest

From hospital bed
To dinner date and a rose
Your eyes held my heart 

On valentine day
Our rose bush blooms crimson buds 
Blushing memory

The stars shine tonight
I look up and you wink back
Your bright eyes hold me


© Brenda V Northeast  26th Jan. 2012
For Francine Roberts - Romantic Senryu Contest

Copyright © Brenda Victoria Northeast | Year Posted 2012

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M.I.A . Date: 1/26/2012 7:26:00 PM awww, you are on a roll of some serious romance emotions here. a winner for me. good luck on the contest Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/26/2012 5:12:00 PM I love the last two and how they related to things in nature. Very lovely, Brenda. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2012 9:32:00 AM Very passionate indeed..I am reading between the lines in asking is this valentine in his heavenly home now?...Good luck in the contest ...Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the show of concern but we don't live in tornado alley but we do live where tornados come quite frequently.There has been several on the ground very close to my home since I have lived here.We have only had destruction of trees and no property damage.God has looked after us in that we have been safe during the storms.Sara Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/26/2012 6:13:00 PM Yes Sara- He passed away 21 days later we had our last Valentine dinner together. It brought tears to my eyes and heart to write it : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/26/2012 9:05:00 AM such emotional words Brenda.. very touching .. good luck .. a contest winner luv.. Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 1/26/2012 12:18:00 AM Great triple romance senryu entry Brenda. Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/26/2012 1:12:00 AM Thank you Robert- I just noticed I have a typing error, blessings, bren : )

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 1/25/2012 10:08:00 PM A beautiful story! How wonderful to be blessed with such love!! Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 1/25/2012 10:21:00 PM Thank you Rhonda many blessings to you, Bren : )