Romance

Musical romance
Playing on the phonograph.
Playing with my head.
I'm dancing, playing for time.
For time to think about you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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May Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 3:49 PM
Romantic songs and a dance of anticipation, Nicely penned
Greenhough Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 5:29 PM
Thank you for the compliment.
Baker Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 9:41 PM
Nice Tanka, Hilda. Light poetry, music, and dancing. Fun read, my friend. Bill
Greenhough Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Thank you for the compliment. Note: she is playing for time.
Empress Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 4:58 AM
Awwn this is so beautiful, i love a romantic poem and this one is so heartfelt. I especially love “ Playing on the phonograph. Playing with my head.“ so gorgeous and so melodious too, musical romance well depicted in just few syllables. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light
Greenhough Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Thank you.
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