Roman Vacation

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Years back, I shimmered in her glow
a city wrapped in rich crochet…
my best friend sipping espresso
down Vatican and lit subway,
where nights  of Rome danced a relay
the hilltops breathing a pearled sigh,
embellished with aisles of bouquet…
I relished her soil brushed in dye.
While Latin tunes drooled an alto
near ruins of Colosseum …
glory be, Pope John Paul we saw,
as crowds waved, rare his decorum.  
Until tears sparkled misty gray
inside vaults and arches nearby;
tales flowed of ancient  kings’ decay…
I relished her soil brushed in dye.
The streets pattered, run-and- go
Along a queue for concert’s replay;
then awed by Sistine’s pomp fresco
while eyes fluttered in a thrilled sway!
How we raced as quaint shops called, “buy,” 
arms cuddling tokens like piled rye
wishes blown, glazed as eve’s firefly! 
I relished her soil brushed in dye.
On our last day, I needed to say
“Yes, I’ll come back before moons cry”…
since this heart pined for Rome each day.
I relished her soil brushed in dye!


Lin Lane's Take A Vacation Contest
Ballade--28 lines   2/16/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/20/2016 9:38:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome "Vacation WIN!" LINDA
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:30:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win!!! Another place I would love to visit :-)
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Date: 2/20/2016 3:14:00 PM
Vacations varied/ vacations great all who won are on the winners’ page..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/20/2016 10:52:00 AM
Nette, very beautiful! I wish to visit one day! congrats on your placement in the contest! *smiles*-luloo
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Date: 2/20/2016 10:19:00 AM
Congrats well done x a beautiful poem well written xxxxx Wendy
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Date: 2/20/2016 10:15:00 AM
Excellent win Nette!
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Date: 2/20/2016 10:15:00 AM
Congrats well done x a beautiful poem well written xxxxx Wendy
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Date: 2/20/2016 8:49:00 AM
Rome is my favorite city in Italy. I loved the atmosphere, the architecture, the attitude..everything. Fontana di Trevi was my favorite I think, stunning. Congrats on your win Nette, and thanks for taking my mind back to some truly wonderful memories :)
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Date: 2/20/2016 7:02:00 AM
Lovely! Enjoyed the journey with your words, Nette. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 2/20/2016 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on this wonderful glimpse of Rome through your eyes, Nette. Thanks so much for taking part in my contest.
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Date: 2/16/2016 10:53:00 AM
Spellbinding poetry which entices me to visit this vibrant city!
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Date: 2/16/2016 8:26:00 AM
This brings back memories, my love and I walked her streets three years ago.
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Date: 2/16/2016 2:21:00 AM
Your artistic visuals and scenic mood took me there--" a city wrapped in rich crochet," glazed as eve's firefly," and more.
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Date: 2/15/2016 9:13:00 PM
What a divinely painted picture nett...awesome
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Date: 2/15/2016 4:13:00 PM
I visited the Vatican in 2006 - thanks fro bringing back many happy memories with your vivid descriptive write:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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