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Rolling Through Fields of Splendor Visual 2

There before us are two roads cut evenly through the field, Left road marking the moons steady journey beyond the horizon, Perhaps the Sun traveled the right road at the speed of light!

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:46:00 PM

Richard, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/11/2015 1:40:00 AM

And back again wid big congrats on ur glorious win wid this exclusive write Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 6:59:00 AM

Thanks Upma.

Joseph May

Date: 2/9/2015 10:45:00 PM

great sijo...congrats on your win

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 7:05:00 AM

Thanks Joeseph.

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/9/2015 4:04:00 PM

Richard, congratulations on your win for the Sijo. Yes, we chose the same visual having the road lead to the Moon. However, I loved your imaginative explanation about the missing Sun! Sandra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 7:01:00 AM

Thanks Sandra.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2015 3:18:00 PM

Way to go with this winner..Congrats...Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 7:02:00 AM

It was my pleasure Sara.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/8/2015 2:30:00 PM

I really love the title for this delightful sijo - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 7:04:00 AM

Hugs back to you Jan.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/8/2015 1:54:00 PM

Richard, this is such a brilliant take on the visual - congratulations on a great win! Warmest regards. Pandita

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 7:05:00 AM

Thanks Pandita.

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/8/2015 11:19:00 AM

A poem with many levels of thought..congratulations ..I found this poem the most interesting in this contest

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 1:23:00 PM

Thanks Frederic I was trying to be original. I am pleased by your response.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/8/2015 7:53:00 AM

This is a very clever write, Richard! The lead up to that excellent final line has all the markings of an experienced pen. Congratulations!! // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 9:01:00 AM

Thanks Paul!:0)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2015 1:08:00 AM

Richard, the title you gave this one really goes well with what you were saying. I enjoyed reading your vision of that picture. Congrats in my contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, how might I improve on it?

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/5/2015 9:50:00 AM

Your poem is visually stunning but I especially like the title. It feels like it could be the title of an old spiritual song.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 1:26:00 PM

A belated thanks. ;0)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/5/2015 6:18:00 AM

beautifully painted richard excellent pen dear friend

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2015 7:48:00 AM

Liam you flatter me, thanks my friend!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/4/2015 2:44:00 PM

Wish you travel through life with the speed your heart desires and on the road your soul choses for certain am I that you will roll over the fields singing the song of happiness, dear Richard! Marvelous!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2015 7:47:00 AM

In that case I will choose slow so that I may have time to savor all the people and moments I am gifted with. Thanks for your kindness and visit Demetrios.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/4/2015 3:02:00 AM

Creative masterpiece Richard ! GL in contest! Sure to do well // upma

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/4/2015 8:09:00 AM

I hope so, thanks Upma.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/4/2015 1:16:00 AM

Lovely poem...love sun an moon imagery.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/4/2015 8:11:00 AM

In this one I was imagining the moon rolling along the surface of the earth. Thanks Eileen.

David Meade

Date: 2/3/2015 9:54:00 PM

forgot the rating!! 7

David Meade

Date: 2/3/2015 9:53:00 PM

Nicely done Richard . . . sun and moon, both are needed and provide us with much delight . . . just as your words that make me ponder the path . . . which one would I choose . . . 7

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/4/2015 8:13:00 AM

No need to choose, you can travel both. Thanks for the visit and the 7 David.