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Rolling

On wave rolls onto Shore, pulling prior wave back Under, out to sea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/6/2009 4:03:00 PM
The ebb and flow, watch them waves go. Surfing the Haiku >> lovely piece Sara >> James
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Date: 11/6/2009 9:40:00 AM
Since I am such a "beach baby" i so appreciate your haiku today.. cause its only in the 30"s in New Jersey today... your poem made me feel, at least in my mind, I can be on the beach somewhere watching the waves rolling... good job... descriptive and real... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S."Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/6/2009 8:54:00 AM
rolling raves, good one, simple
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Date: 11/6/2009 4:15:00 AM
You really have a talent for haikus, Sara. I can feel the gentle "rolling" of the waves in the tempo of this write. Love, carolyn
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