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Rollercoaster Mind

My
Mind
Melts
Orange

Scattering butterflies
Singing with iridescent
Chameleons
First aqua green, then
Revolution

Clubbing twilight with both
Fists, gulped by gallons
Of planets

Parading
As thoughtless trees

Overbearing junipers
Crowding the galaxy

With shrinking
Wisdom

Unafraid of red
Ants

Colonizing advanced
Mountaintops

Millions
Of miles

Inside

My

Mind



08/08/13
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Sandra Adams Date: 8/22/2013 8:58:00 PM your mind is filled with colorful images, thank for letting us see those colors come to life so beautifully...enjoyed the read :) Login to Reply

Rachel W Date: 8/22/2013 10:05:00 AM The window into your mind is very colourful! I like it :) Cheers, Rachel Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/14/2013 2:55:00 PM Ahhh!! Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/12/2013 1:21:00 PM Jimbo....the title drew me in....my mind...and emotions on this ride....Colorful write... :-D Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 8/12/2013 10:23:00 AM Jimbo this is amazing poetry,,, Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/12/2013 10:02:00 AM jimbo, a burst of images puzzling and enticing.. what a whirlwind of a piece.... racishing!..:) huggs Login to Reply

Christine Phillips Date: 8/12/2013 8:32:00 AM I like the different imagery circulating throughout this poem. The arrangement of words adds to the inner meaning of this poem. "millions of miles inside my mind" very strong and beautiful ending Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/10/2013 5:41:00 AM morning Jimbo! Refreshing! Just as your writing always is! BIG HUGS! Light & Love Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/9/2013 5:42:00 PM hey is this for the unusual pattern of free verse contest? If not, it should be. It really rocks! Login to Reply

Dom- X- Date: 8/9/2013 1:51:00 PM amazing. DX Login to Reply

Cherie Thomas Date: 8/9/2013 11:00:00 AM Love your creativity & energy...awesome write!!! I felt transported into this vivid cosmic, place...ty4sharing jimbo really enjoyed your thoughts today:0) cherie... Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 8/9/2013 10:10:00 AM Brilliant my friend! One of the best I've seen from you... to my special poems list! Take care! Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 8/9/2013 9:16:00 AM Your heart ran wild on this one. I understand the rollercoaster in this piece. Fantastic lines! Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 8/9/2013 1:07:00 AM I love the way your mind scatter butterflies in such a world of red ants.Maybe we should all travel the journey of miles within your mind..Maybe then We can.reach the peak of evergreen and blossoming colours..A very beautiful poem which flows against the dirt covering this haven Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/8/2013 9:27:00 PM A very imaginative and creative write, Jim! A very colorful mind you have! Love, Kim Login to Reply