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she lost a marble ran downhill to catch the fall slid the slope and bruised her knees ... found hidden treasures near the spring of bouncing hope drank from the source and marbled 01st November 2020 contest spina sedoka sponsor Nette Onclaud memory of youth

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Date: 11/1/2020 12:02:00 PM
Hello Kai Michael Neumann, I have never lost any marbles. eNJOY YOUR DAY MY FRIEND.
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Date: 11/1/2020 3:06:00 AM
Ive lost many marbles in my life, but never found any treasure... Great analogy Kai..
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/1/2020 3:55:00 AM
I too have lost my marbles in the search for sanity. But my biggest treasure is that I actually found a few rough diamonds on the road ...