Rock Me In Your Love

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In need of comfort from the load I bear
This message I relay through eyes that plead
I wait as you disrobe each anxious care
and gently free me of what might impede

On bed of dreams you lay me down and spread
the doors to inner sanctum open wide
with sureness born of love you then embed
the healing that I need so deep inside

I close my eyes as cares all dissipate
on wings of fairies and are born above
you gently rock me, and I'm free of weight
Afloat in sphere that's only touched by love

You whisper in my ear in breathless tone
"Feel nothing else but what is here and now
Give in to me," I yield to words you moan
your body validates in rocking vow

You rock me till release is mine at last
and then you wash away sweet residue
"Now close your eyes and let me hold you fast
and let my healing love now cradle you."

Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/16/2016 9:30:00 AM
great quality with wonderful fitting of words and lines. The grace from this page is worth more than a 7. Visiting your pages always come with meeting my expectations and with this I say "Keep on writing please".. So so incredible.
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Date: 2/11/2016 8:21:00 AM
This poem describes to bond of passion and love between two people so beautifully.It even gives a feel of comfort and joys of give and take.
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Date: 2/10/2016 9:59:00 AM
I feel every line, you take me to that wonderful place my lady and I share. Thanks, and well done.
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Date: 2/4/2016 9:56:00 AM
I meant Hugs back to you. I'm glad some pressure has been lifted of of you. Take care.
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Date: 2/4/2016 9:12:00 AM
Huge back to you.:0)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/4/2016 9:13:00 AM
Just handed in my semester grades....What a weight off my shoulders. I have a breather now...and I plan to catch up with everyone here. Hugs...
Date: 2/4/2016 8:59:00 AM
Lots to lean, I'm heading to Calgary today and Ontario on Tuesday.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/4/2016 9:00:00 AM
May God go with you...and meet all your needs according to His riches in glory, Richard. Hugs
Date: 2/3/2016 8:15:00 AM
Not only beautifully tender but also profound, dear Eileen! Excellent writing!
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Date: 2/2/2016 3:12:00 PM
How lovely and gentle this is, Eileen! Tender and sensual, and with an ending that's cradled in a sense of security. Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/2/2016 9:43:00 AM
Today I start my new job!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/2/2016 10:59:00 AM
Hope it's a great day for you, dear. Happy thoughts your way....
Date: 2/2/2016 12:28:00 AM
Smooth, gentle, sensual....you really do this very well, Eileen. Lovely. Viv x
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Date: 2/1/2016 12:51:00 AM
Goodnight for me and good morning for you. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 2/1/2016 12:22:00 AM
My enchantress, A gentle poem of love so sweet, of love so deep without conceit, cradled in each others arms, Soothed by one anothers charms, your words resound within my heart, I have been pierced by cupids dart. Beautiful poem sweet lady, a seven and as always a home in my favourites. love Shane xxx
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Date: 1/31/2016 7:46:00 PM
this passion is romantic...well penned Eileen, excellent
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Date: 1/31/2016 7:17:00 PM
Rock me gently / Rock me slowly / Take it easy / Don't you know / That I have never bin loved like this before. lol, you've excelled with this one my little Desert Orchid. Beautiful. Take care, Richard
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Date: 1/31/2016 4:58:00 PM
- Beautiful as always, dear Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2016 10:38:00 AM
this kind of passion captivates; so wonderfully conveyed, eileen... much enjoyed!... huggs
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Date: 1/31/2016 9:27:00 AM
Beautifully and tenderly expressed.
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Date: 1/31/2016 7:13:00 AM
so sensual Eileen you are and will forever be the Queen of Passion in my eyes:-) hugs Jan xx
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