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Rock-N-Roll Sanctity

Acid rock twilight-zone trip tunes edged in freaked heavy-metal screech sandpaper wrapping entombing raw youth scarce comfort from words thinly preached. Promise, faith, determination stretched beyond a mere beseech rainbow storms midst arid sand dunes tsunamis of love's rampant truth. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ AC/DC: a rock band - pioneers of heavy metal BC/AD: respectively, the time before and after the resurrection according to the Christian tradition Rhyme scheme: AC/DC.... bc, ad.. i

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Date: 8/25/2011 9:13:00 AM
Congrats Nancy on your HM in Debbie's contest...very nice poem.
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Date: 8/24/2011 12:49:00 AM
Very cool poem, Nancy! And I definitely enjoyed your rhyme scheme, very witty of you to do that! Congrats & Way to go!! :D
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Date: 8/23/2011 4:07:00 PM
Congrats Nancy on your HM in the contest.. enjoy super honor for excellent poetry luv..
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Date: 8/23/2011 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "AC DC AD BC" contest Nancy. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2011 2:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win in this fine contest..Sara
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Date: 8/23/2011 12:54:00 PM
I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )
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Date: 8/4/2011 11:12:00 PM
Interesting poem. I like the wording. Its pretty unique.
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:05:00 AM
Dear new poet friend Nancy IF this is the band ACDC please make a note to that effect on the bottom of the verse example * ACDC the rock band [if not please note which acronym was your inspiration] & give me a few more lines for me the longer the better ;) [tips from the judge LOL] what you have done IS very good! Light & Love
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Date: 8/3/2011 12:46:00 AM
A trippy trip! Vibrant emotional expression, a rainbow storming amidst arid sand dunes, what a thought :)
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