Robin Redbreast’s Pocket

Blithe breaks at the illumination of muted yellow leaves,
so alive, nearly laughing like children; still life clinging.
Autumnal blouse of painted bark and pretty sleeves.
Silence of bluebirds and red robins - inward singing.

The rake’s barely broken earth, a few clingers at task.
Season’s copacetic with only a tinge or tingle of coolness.
Time’s fallen back as I read and write in open-door-bask.
I will join worshippers at church to net November’s fullness.

A shiver, a shake, an ooh, an ahh, A phoebe does go
on and on about the break of day; brightness in her clutch.
The slightest breeze bursts forth to create the ebb and flow.
It’s like an artist brushing hither then thither; a mirthful touch.

More beaks join the chorus, as will I, when I hear the music.
Oh how delightful, a dizzy dance of bells in the wind’s socket.
I swoon and sashay, on the pavement, in communion’s cubic.
How much more seasonal joy leaps from robin redbreast’s pocket?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/8/2024 6:41:00 PM
Wow, dear Kim....an amazing poem.....the title really had me. <3
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2024 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Paige! :)
Date: 11/4/2024 10:59:00 AM
I could have sworn I saw a robin in my garden, yet I'm sure that's a bit early as it's usually December. Good omen, me thinks.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/4/2024 12:28:00 PM
Perhaps so! Blessings, Paul!
Date: 11/4/2024 10:48:00 AM
Dear Kim, First of all I love all types of birds and your poem drew me in. And the fact that it is an Autumn poem drew me in even more, which means this poem is full of joy!! For about two years, I had a Cardinal peck at one of my windows, and my wife and I called him Carl. I do not know what happened to him, but I have not seen him for several months. I miss Carl!! Autumn Blessings, MY Dear Friend, Daniel
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/4/2024 12:27:00 PM
Thanks for that share. I love that Carl came to visit! Thank you, Daniel! I am enjoying our cool Autumn day today :)
Date: 11/3/2024 10:52:00 AM
Dear Kim, this is beyond beautiful, I absolutely love the way you’ve painted imagery and your wordplay, this flows in such an artistic manner, showing me all shades of autumn, i especially loved “ More beaks join the chorus, as will I, when I hear the music. Oh how delightful, a dizzy dance of bells in the wind’s socket.” ah so serene and soulful. Pleasure reading this gem. Hope you are doing well.:Sending you light always~
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2024 10:56:00 AM
Thanks, Ink! So glad you enjoyed it! Blessings!
Date: 11/3/2024 8:57:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem. It`s very profound and unique.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2024 10:57:00 AM
Thank you, Vesna! I appreciate! :)
Date: 11/3/2024 8:52:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your write with a great ending... The birds seem happy with the cooler weather....Have a wonderful day/week writing away.............
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2024 10:58:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Paula!
Date: 11/3/2024 5:51:00 AM
Loved your poem, a joyous read, your robin redbreast has great allure.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2024 10:58:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Victor!
Date: 11/3/2024 5:26:00 AM
your words sing out to me in joyful song Kim, this is such a delight to read on a dull grey autumnal day!:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2024 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 11/3/2024 5:10:00 AM
wonderful poetry, for my eyes and mind, you have captured so much music and colors and essence of autumn, just reading and reading again your poem have a sweet sunday poet
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2024 11:07:00 AM
Aww…thanks so much! Makes my day!
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter