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Robin Red-Breast Alights

robin red-breast alights winter welcomes that odd prancing pale sun nods; robin twitches, smiles hungry beak pecks away worm wonders why, what the rush is May 14, 2019 Entry in Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868 contest Sponsor: Dear Heart Theme: a living scene, written in Verse

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/24/2019 6:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your deserving first placement Gershon! : )

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/24/2019 7:10:00 PM

Many thanks for noticing and taking time for congrats, Connie. Best to you! :) gw

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/24/2019 2:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/24/2019 3:28:00 PM

Appreciate you taking time to note this, Robert. A truly nice gesture on your part, duly recorded in my heart! Best wishes, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2019 12:05:00 PM

- Congratulations on a great first place in this contest, a wonderful writing Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/21/2019 2:39:00 PM

Thank you so much for noticing and commenting, Anne-Lise. Best wishes, Gershon

Constance La France

Date: 5/21/2019 9:22:00 AM

Gershon congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/21/2019 11:37:00 AM

Truly a privilege to have had the opportunity to enter, and truly thrilled with the result. Thank you so much, Constance! Happy Tuesday! :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2019 3:25:00 PM

cute picture you gave us!! Congrats on the win.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/20/2019 8:28:00 PM

Thanks for the positivity, Andrea. Greatly appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/20/2019 2:32:00 PM

Back with congratulations!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/15/2019 1:08:00 AM

Your worms are smarter than the nightcrawlers we have in Kansas then.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/15/2019 11:03:00 AM

OK. I'm going to try to wrap my arms around your comment, utilizing logic: Let's see: a.) Not all worms are nightcrawlers. b.) But all nightcrawlers are worms. Therefore, c.) Not all worms crawl at night! How's that for brilliant deductive reasoning?! (Ahem, no answer necessary! LOL). :) gw

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/14/2019 11:36:00 PM

The poor hapless clueless worm! Nice write Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/15/2019 11:01:00 AM

Ha, ha -- defenseless (worms) too; they need a good, tough Defense Attorney, methinks. LOL. Thanks for the viewpoint, P.S! Best wishes, Gershon

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/14/2019 2:49:00 PM

You captured the scene well Gershon, good luck. Tom.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/14/2019 7:07:00 PM

Appreciate your positive feedback on Mr. Robin Red-breast, Tom! :) gw