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Robin

Contest: Songbird Haiku Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Written 8-17-2021 confident robin trilling beauty through the air my day is complete

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Date: 8/23/2021 3:21:00 PM
ahhh, so lovely . So far you are the only other person I see to use the word trill. I used it in my haiku also. Love that word. Congrats on your win, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/24/2021 2:23:00 AM
I love the word trill. Thank you Andrea.
Date: 8/23/2021 10:25:00 AM
Caren, congratulations on your win! I really like this. It touches on a unique, twilight experience - one I look forward to each day. Our robins sing at twilight. They punctuate the end of the day with their melodic chirp! So well done! Blessings to you!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/24/2021 2:23:00 AM
The robins have the pretties trills.
Date: 8/23/2021 5:24:00 AM
Caren, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/23/2021 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Tania
Date: 8/18/2021 7:12:00 PM
The simplicity of this haiku brings serenity that can be felt by the reader…and it lingers on..I love this! A fav..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/18/2021 10:35:00 PM
thank you JCB I do love simple, I live simple.
Date: 8/18/2021 5:04:00 AM
Excellent. That wonderful feeling of a day completed by the beauty of nature :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/18/2021 10:35:00 PM
It is so wonderful when nature is involved