Robin

Contest: Songbird Haiku
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Written 8-17-2021

 
 
confident robin
trilling beauty through the air
my day is complete

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Andrea Dietrich

August 23, 2021 at 3:21 PM

ahhh, so lovely . So far you are the only other person I see to use the word trill. I used it in my haiku also. Love that word. Congrats on your win, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger

August 24, 2021 at 2:23 AM

I love the word trill. Thank you Andrea.

Sam Kauffman

August 23, 2021 at 10:25 AM

Caren, congratulations on your win! I really like this. It touches on a unique, twilight experience - one I look forward to each day. Our robins sing at twilight. They punctuate the end of the day with their melodic chirp! So well done! Blessings to you!

Caren Krutsinger

August 24, 2021 at 2:23 AM

The robins have the pretties trills.