Robbing Hood

My supervisor ambled by one day 
To tell me he was adding one more to my load:
A juvie no other counselor could reach.
What could I say?

Gerry was a worldly-wise fifteen, 
A self-assured, well-spoken lad
Whose attitude was such
That nothing you could threaten mattered much.

He had a history, this young man,
A JD rap sheet that a decade spanned.
But what was curious to me
Was the final entry in his résumé.   

Shoplifting candy bars from supermarket shelves,
I said. That seems beneath you,
Given your transgressions of years past. 
He laughed. Skybars, Smores, Snickers, I amassed
Enough to sweeten lots of dreams.

You have a raging sweet tooth then, I said. 
No, he replied. Sugar rots your teeth and gives you zits. 
I was building up my stash for Halloween.
I live in Tower 6 on Forty-Fourth and Elm.  
On Candy Eve the high-rise kids stay home,
Kept inside to keep them safe. This childhood rite
Held hostage to the dangers of the night.

But this time round, this year when darkness falls, 
I will do trick-or-treating in reverse,
Carrying my sack of lifted sweets
Up and down each flight, down every hall,
Knocking on every door where there’s a tyke 
(I know them all)
And offering each one a reach into my bag,
A taste of the tradition.

Dumbstruck, I shed all my prior postulations
Of this "delinquent," with his hoodie on 
And his air of I-don’t-care-what-happens-here.

How often I’ve despaired of human nature,
Doubting accepted wisdom there’s good in every heart,
In every breast the seed of something fine.
But not this day.

2/13/2016

Twisted Poem about Robin Hood Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/19/2016 12:39:00 AM
Totally enjoyed this narrative. It's nice to be able to see the good in a person of whom others have given up. Best, Kim
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Date: 2/21/2016 4:08:00 AM
This was inspired by an actual incident, Kim. So it really is inspirational.
Date: 2/13/2016 2:53:00 PM
I love the 'sweet' twist Steve very creative write good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Steve Grammatico
Date: 2/13/2016 3:20:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. If there's any choice, I'll always choose narrative.
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