Robber of the Hood

When I
   was just 
    starting my
      adult life, first
        job after college
         with responsibility.
          Somehow, I took the
           wrong interview, or was
             so naive that it clouded 
              any rational judgement I 
               should have had regarding
               the company where I was going 
               to work.  The man at the top was
               a crook, only I was unable to see it.
               His Robin Hood act was just that, an act.
                Others tried to warn me, but what did
                they know?  I was going to be happy,
                 and then they would see how much
                  their insight was wrong.  So, after 
                  two years of struggling through 
                   taking from the poor to give to
                 the rich I ended without a love, 
   MY "ROBIN HOOD" WAS NOTHING MORE THAN A 
                or the will to live.  I was a numb,     CHARLATAN,
              dumb, bum.  Yet I was given                    WHO WAS
            a second chance at life.                                    DETERMINED
           The Lord moves in                                               TAKE TO
         mysterious ways.                                              FROM THE
       Life, again!                                                     POOR AND
     Yes, Me.                                                       GIVE ONLY                                                                TO HIMSELF.  FOOLISH, STILL BELIEVING IN THE MISSION
THAT HE ESPOUSED, I FOUND OUT THE HARD WAY THAT
THE MAN OF THIS SHERWOOD FOREST WAS LIFE'S WAY
OF TELLING ME THAT I KNEW NOTHING OF THE WORLD
AND THOSE WHO WOULD SEE EVERYTHING THROUGH
ROSE COLORED GLASSES.  I GAVE THEM MY ALL, ONLY
TO HAVE IT DASHED UPON THE ROCKS OF REALITY 
AND TRUTH. THIS WAS THE GIFT HE GAVE TO SO
MANY OF US POOR WORKERS WHO BELIEVED IN
HIS EXOTIC VISIONS, BUT TAUGHT US THE TRUE
MEANING...HIS BEING THE "ROBBER OF THE HOOD"!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/30/2016 2:38:00 PM
I simply lack words and compliments for this fine piece and for this I say.... Blessed art thou whom pens a glorious piece with expressive lines and touching words... For the thee, I add to my profound group of favourites. A definite 7!
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 5/4/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thank you, Funom. I appreciate your read and wholesome words for this piece. Please pray that I can get back to my thoughts, as I have had a bit of a writer's block of late. I am grateful to writers like you who say what they mean, instead of leaving the static comments of most. Keep smiling and bless you!
Date: 2/15/2016 6:01:00 AM
funny that you mention a sail in your reply below, because that's what I was thinking. Love your effort though -I must say. I also quite like the way that your second part of the poem intersects the first. Great words.
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Dan Cwiak
Date: 2/16/2016 9:44:00 AM
Thanks for the read and comments, Scott. I haven't been on the Soup lately, so I have some catching up to do. I appreciate your letting me know that I wasn't the only one that thought it looked like a sail. Perhaps I'll use it for a contest about ships...lol
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