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Roaming Through Memories

alone now I roam through memories recalling treasures of the past journeying back to seaside treks with my husband riding to the city to see Broadway shows reliving nights of romance even visiting John’s grave in the best of times memories carry me to ocean jetties where vows of love were exchanged as waves lapped gently against rocks if only we could feel these sensations again family outings at the beach building sandcastles burying Dad’s feet in sand sauntering along the festive boardwalk hiking through woodlands with friends who have passed wanting to hug them again feeling the weight of concrete preventing my spirit from moving on as I reach out to heaven seeking a sign praying for guidance hoping past joy will be restored confined by sadness I roam through memories alone now
For Drake’s “I Roam” contest 4/23/11

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Date: 1/18/2017 10:24:00 PM
fell hard for this beautiful, love filled poem....found it searching "best of's...you allow the reader (me, jimmy!) to insert similar feeling and emptiness wishes...thank you...(& thx for xmas card) jim
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Date: 6/20/2011 1:49:00 PM
A touching piece from you Carolyn, its good but hard to feel, and yet i bet you wouldn't trade your memories and experiences ever..yours Joe.
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:40:00 PM
nostalgia lingers between those languid lines, carols! special congrats and have fun fishing/ diving...:) huggs
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Date: 5/26/2011 1:36:00 PM
I was touched by your memories. how they always stay with us, comforting us by their presence..Congrats on your win Carolyn with this very special one.. and yes happy fishing, happy cruising too..huggs, gautami
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:58:00 AM
Well Carolyn this poem is worthy of higher placement!Congrats on your HM...Visit me.....
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Date: 5/26/2011 4:41:00 AM
Such a sad end to this beauty. Many congrats dear friend. I am much better now. Thanks for your support and prayers.
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2011 9:49:00 AM
A sad, but beautiful write. Many congrats on your win, my friend : )
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Date: 5/25/2011 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of drake, carolyn
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Date: 5/25/2011 5:38:00 AM
Simply awesome!! Congratulations on your placement, Carolyn. :)
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Date: 5/25/2011 5:20:00 AM
memories are so great to hold on to congrats on your win in the contest. cory
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:53:00 AM
A lovely bitter-sweet poem. Memories are precious. Even the slightly painful ones can be good to look back on. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/3/2011 7:28:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Carolyn. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:48:00 AM
Carolyn, I am so sorry for your loss of the special things that we all take for granted. I now am living what you must have gone through . This is a great tribute to your life as it used to be. In friendship Anne.
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:49:00 PM
thank you for commenting on Brandon My Grandson
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Date: 4/25/2011 1:04:00 PM
You have taken me on this journey with you Carolyn, sad memories but they are treasured by you and that is sometimes the best ones to have. The joy of having experienced it all.. A beautiful piece for Drake's contest.. Best wishes my friend, love Wilma
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Date: 4/25/2011 11:49:00 AM
It is sad to have to roam this way through memories. Maybe it is time to make some new ones? Good luck in Drake's contest. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:34:00 AM
Hope those memories are all sweet. I might be off the soup for a while because am having cataracts removed from both eyes. Love, Dave
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:16:00 PM
Enjoyed going down memory lane with you reliving your memories..Good luck in the contest with this great work.Thanks for stopping by my blog..The children had a great time.They will have some great memories to carry into the future for a good long time..I am so sore and swollen feet and ankles and legs...Sara
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Date: 4/24/2011 10:17:00 AM
Sending you hugs. I know how you must be feeling, my friend. Good things will happen : )
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Date: 4/24/2011 4:43:00 AM
I hope you are having a nice time! This is a real cool poem Carolyn! Also, have a happy Easter! Oh, I have written a poem dedicated to you. With your permission, I will type it up and post it. I made an Easter egg poem for you and all my friends on here as well. Please check it out. Take care. Much Love and Respect!
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Date: 4/23/2011 11:36:00 PM
CArolyn, This is the kind of poem I can see winning top place in his contest. You did very well with the theme. It's sad but done in a way that good poets can do a sad poem. Hope you place high!
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Date: 4/23/2011 11:20:00 PM
hi carols, soup mail!
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Date: 4/23/2011 7:20:00 PM
a tear jerker Carolyn, I had to stop while reading this, you painted a picture here so real, that i could see everything. thank you for reading and commenting on my Grandma's Rocking Chair.
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Date: 4/23/2011 11:35:00 AM
Another excellent write from you Carolyn!Best wishes--kash
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